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"Turntable Situations" by Ind3cisiv3

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Gay-o Felony:
Chorus :

Lost control for about 4 months, it all turned for the worse/
Felt like i was the only one going through this trauma, felt like a curse/
Had the power, and the right frame of mind, to put my enemies in a funeral hurse/
Watchin' my friends fade quicker than forgotten memories, watched them all dispurse/
If only they could of seen through my eyes, and the life i had to lead, found out how much it hurts/

Verse 1 of 1 :  

As i looked at myself in the mirror, i wonder how people see me and how i react to the problem at hand/
Seeing me change my ways more times than wind directions, constant mood swings like the shiftin' of sand/
Then at night, on my own, lookin' into space, shoutin' louder than a fighter jets engines or a marchin' band/
No one could stop the trauma that would soon reach me, they only make it worse, is this what god planned?/
Watchin the two halfs of my life tear each other apart, felt like a movie, and i had the front seats/
No matter how much i called their names to stop, the arguements tor the roof off, neither would except defeat/
As world war three, made me evacuate my home, the grudge's grew stronger, as my life got stuck on repeat/
Wished i could of taken the memory back as it was faulty, "maam, could i change this?", but i wasn't given a reciept/
I'm findin' it hard to get through all this on my own, even though i have everyone around me, their not feelin' what im feelin'/
If only they could see how hard it is to put on a face over another one, covering up the bad times, wont make it go away, i need heelin'/
So to sacrafice my broken heart for the event in which my life would take me, to another place of refuge, this meant i was leavin'/
All other issues where makin' me struggle, i felt like fallin' to the ground, beg for forgiveness for what i havent done, i was believin'/

Chorus :  

Lost control for about 4 months., it all turned for the worse/
Felt like i was the only one going through this trauma, felt like a curse/
Had the power, and the right frame of mind, to put my enemies in a funeral hurse/
Watchin' my friends fade quicker than forgotten memories, watched them all dispurse/
If only they could of seen through my eyes, and the life i had to lead, found out how much it hurts/



-- I went through a bad time in my life, but kept goin' strong, held on to that dream, and pulled my self through!

Feedback please!















 

Kill:
I don't know what exactly it's about, what I do know is that you didn't post for a few months...I felt this spit, lyrically it was simplistic, but I felt it

Reef:
Man.. I know what the shit was about and the way you put the whole situation in2 a rhyme was awesome. I felt it, and as my homie said it was simplistic.. But you expressed yourself really well!

Gay-o Felony:
Aiight thanx homies... anyone else got some feedback, this kinda important to me, want people to finally see what i went through,

basically, to cut about a 4month story short, my life turned round did a 360, fucked my emotions, sent em skyrocketin', my family broke up into two different segments of reality!

I was torn between both parts!

Feedback Please!

'Illicit':
hey, nice shit. I like some deep shit like that regardless of how simplistic it may be. dont matter as long as the delivery is good.

wheres verse 2 n 3? this might make a good song dawg.

keep blessin

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