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Xearo:
Haymaker your cerebral cortex, then uppercut the cartilage in your nostril passages/
From amateur to novice, and master to emperor, slashin my advesaries in a way thats savage//
Set up a phalanx in the battlefield like the ancient Spartans and Trojans/
Leave you soakin in a puddle on your own plasma and blood from a Golf Swing from Ben Hogan//
With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//
I'll tear the flesh right off your muscle tissue, tear the muscle tissue off your rock-hard skeleton/
Rip off your nose with a vice grip, and nomore from now on can you ever smell-a-scent// (Couldn't think of anything else)
I'll send you in a decent from the thermosphere to the liquid molten mantle deep beneath the surface/
Similar to the Lion in the Wizard of Oz, to face me...I'll have your retina's searchin for your courage//

A quick 10 bars...

Felt like Keyin...

GhOzT

__kaLipZo__:
burnouts like myself seem to lose themselves reading big words as such that u used, but very nice piece =) =)

@Ss@sSiN:
tight ass shit, keep that shit commin

'Illicit':

--- Quote ---With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//

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yo lol this was ill

Reef:

--- Quote from: __kaLipZo__ on December 09, 2002, 06:43:34 AM ---burnouts like myself seem to lose themselves reading big words as such that u used, but very nice piece =) =)

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lol

Shit was tight.. Vocab was real nice!

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