PLEASE RATE.FORGIVE ME by Bez (Heart Of Man Remix)

[@Ss@sSiN]

here some feed back,

the topic was cool, but ive heard it all to much,
overall nice verse, good style and im out

[da_notorious_mack]

I grew up and flowered like a bright red rose,
But the petals started fallin, my roots where exposed,
And you can't turn back down the road you chose,

dem lines ripped ish up,i swear the only rhyme i aint felt of yours was ya hit em up,cus dat i believe dat song classic and shouldnt be tampered wit,i didnt even like the eminem cover


i give this 1 7/10

[M Dogg™]

From what I've seen from you, this is getting better. I like it, and am sorry for sleeping. Tight rhyme homie.

[bez]

From what I've seen from you, this is getting better. I like it, and am sorry for sleeping. Tight rhyme homie.

its ok mate, thanks for the reply.  

[bez]

uppin