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__kAlipZo__ Vs. sHroOmY

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@Ss@sSiN:
kalipzo came harder, shroomy's flowed well but the rhyme scheme was too simple
keep writin'
vote= kalipzo

Lost Titan:
i agree with Deadly Gauge
shroomy it was smiple
Kalipzo had better hits
Shrommy keep at it

Vote= Kalipzo

sHroomY:
my rap's to simple ej??//that's okey, I beat you like a fuckin worm with rabes//cut you in pieces so your bitchass needs 3 graves//I still have those blades//aight I'm gonna keep rhymin, for ya'll to see me shinin//I'm jus 13 years old and I'm already blindin//I really do think this is amusin, ya'll say I have a simplistic mind but ya'll suffer mas confusion//how do I know that??//simplistic words do contain the word fat//jus like yo ass//fasten yo seatbelts fas//I don't have a large vocabularie//but anythin I say can sound so scary//if ya'll have tips for me jus say it//then I can improve my rhyme and cause confusion a bit

I know I'm to simplistic but what do ya expect I'm thirteen years old

Kill:
Yeah I agree. Kalipzo took this, it wasn't excitin but sum lines hit. Shroomy, urs was very simple but since u only 13 keep spittin, I'm pretty sure u can improve

@Ss@sSiN:
kalipzo wit another win?   :P

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