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Keep ya Mouth Closed (dear mack)

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Koncept:
every time you drop a diss I'ma retaliate//
Why you do hate, is it because I got skill and you can't relate//
Your keeping beef alive after you said it was dead//
I guess Knocept got to you and got inside your head//
I think I figured it out, you're a fan//
You love the attention that comes with this man//
Face the truth, bitch, you love me//
Deep down inside you really wanna hug me//
Look mack, I'm not your dad//
Get away, your attention has been had//
Look if you wanna battle, then set it up, hoe//
Otherwise keep your mouth closed//[/b]

__kaLipZo__:
id like to see this battle....cant wait =) wha was he sayin btw kon?

Fatal619:
maybe it's me but tha rhyme sceme don't go.

you a kat that has potential so you can work on that and as for tha disses come a little better with tha complexity and wordplay. you can only read so much common lines before you get bored. work on it playa but this was nice. work on a few things and you'll move up in no time.

Koncept:
this was just a quick keystyle

mack said the beef was dead and then he disses me in his post "under sieage"

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