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ITW on IBO's Art of War ...Don't Use Me

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Trauma-san:
Sorry it took me so long to get over here, ITW.  You've got a lot of energy in your stuff, that's always good, man, I haven't heard this beat from IBo before, GOOD GOD this thing is a monster.  This is like commercial quality, did you sample anything on it, IBo, or is this your creation?

Your flow is pretty good ITW, how long you been rappin?  If you got a little bit better Mic you could kill it... just keep practing though, and try to control the noise a little bit more, once you mess around with it a while, you'll be able to trim all that stuff up.  

One suggestion, I'd try and make some sort of chorus... you got the 'don't use me" part, but if you added in more stuff during that to the beat, or more background vocals or something, it'd make it tighter, it'd give the strong structure instead of just being a loop.  It'll sound a lot better when you get the beat, but give your vocals to IBo so he can mix them in good in the right spots and stuff, instead of just laying them at random on the beat.  

Peace~

LyRiCaL_G:
thats whats im sayin dawg about this beat, its somthang dre would be proud of, this is the most fuckin dope beat ive heard off the net, damn its tite

peace

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