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TAG BATTLE- @$$@$$!N and Mack -vs- Mdogg and Koncept

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Koncept:
Elite coming back, poised to attack//
Mack and his bitch must want it bad//
Hatters getting together is sad like the scooter fad//
We the creators creating hell in a note pad//
The world is in your grasps, but the world is what I have//
Now your not gunna take what's mine//
So I guess we gudda go line for line//
Gauge doesn't spit, he swallows//
Birds of a feather flock together, all the haters fallow//
Mack is just another Nas groupie//
I'ma put him in the ER for years like George Clooney//
He thought he knew me, he thought he could rip through me//
Mack says he's still a virgin even after his asshole was breached//
Gauge is the alter boy and Mack is the catholic priest//
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Kill:
Dayum, I clicked reset form lol. My vote goes to Mack and Deadly Gauge, but i'm too lazy to re-write my comments on each verse now, so I'll explain later

'Illicit':
aight

mack: nice multis, though some of em didnt rhyme completely ya verse had dope punchlines and all. personals all there.

4/5

deadly: somehow, this wasnt what you prolly intended to write, competing this to your other verses, this was above average but not what ur capable of. a few good lines in it.

3/5


mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.

4.5/5

koncept: dope piece you dropped there. punches, personals,  that george clooney shit was funny lol.  flow was cool too

4/5

vote: MDogg, Koncept

Kill:

--- Quote from: Illicit aka CeeRide on January 21, 2003, 07:07:34 AM ---aight

mack: nice multis, though some of em didnt rhyme completely ya verse had dope punchlines and all. personals all there.

4/5

deadly: somehow, this wasnt what you prolly intended to write, competing this to your other verses, this was above average but not what ur capable of. a few good lines in it.

3/5
--- End quote ---
I agree on this, only I'd give Deadly a 3.4/5 and Mack a 4.1/5 which makes the average score a 3.75/5



--- Quote ---mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.

4.5/5

koncept: dope piece you dropped there. punches, personals,  that george clooney shit was funny lol.  flow was cool too

4/5

vote: MDogg, Koncept
--- End quote ---
I don't really agree on this. The Mack disses (especially the line Illicit mentioned) were nice, but dissin Deadly for allegedly bein gay without includin wordplay or actual facts seemed kinda lame to me. I think M Dogg can do better, he had a nice verse though, but I'd give it a 3.8/5.

Koncept's was pretty short and the first part wasn't that great, he then came with some nice punches and funny lines so he gets a 3.6/5. The average score hence is 3.7/5

so by a very tiny lil Mack and Deadly Gauge take it

VOTE = MACK & DEADLY GAUGE

M Dogg™:

--- Quote from: Illicit aka CeeRide on January 21, 2003, 07:07:34 AM ---mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.


--- End quote ---

I know... I was like, damn, that's a tight line... lol. It wrote it after the whole Cloud 9 shit, so you could imagion how I felt then. Fuck lyricals, just got harder... lol.

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