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||| ~~ I-BO ~vS~ M-Dogg ~~ ||| VOOOOOTE !!!!
.:R-E-L:.:
MDOGG...great flow, hard hits n punches, impressive metaphors
I-BO...AMAZING metaphors n similies, good intro, good multis
Close..but gotta give it to I-BO
Primo:
Alright..Here we go...First off i'm not the type to vote for someone because of slashes and complicated words..
If you have shit it has to make sense..And no offence very few of I-bos verse made sense.
I-bo's verse..
u must have amnesia, how else could you even "challenge-me"?//
if i was fighting the whole Elite, yall still woudnt "manage-me"//
Since when do challenge and manage rhyme?
knockin him out, likea boxer in the ring, witout even tuching my "curse-kit"//
And this means??
Im not dissing cuz i liked some of the multis..
its like fightin a kid, this battle is "stric-tly-un-balanced" | how much needed in handicap for you to be able to "give-me-a-challenge"//
I liked this line..Flowed good, nice multi..
like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious | claimin to be dope when u aint? fool, dont "fire-contra-dictionz"//
Another example of Not rhyming.. This line aint bad if u put like "like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious visions" it would of made sense and rhymed well with the other multis and second bar.
call me "abstract", cuz no way for you to "tuch" my level | your biggets achievment would be: loosin this game without KO//
BTW T-O-U-C-H....and another example of non-sense..
Now critiquing M-doggs verse..
I felt his shit was a bit simplistic but it flow very well..
And honestly half this rhyme did not rhyme..
You take ToNe's command well the Elite was the promise land/
ToNe set you up and you were to cocky to admit you fucked/
Now you spit cum I spit fire, that's why you're multiple retired/
You got the rhyme going in One bar..The thing is you need to work on the rhyme pattern...You need like 3 Bars to rhyme..It often throws people off.
Those rhyme injects made you rhymes bigger but you dick smaller/
I'm done now, so go back to ToNe, your wannabe male caller/*
See you did it here..U changed up the rhyme pattern and instead of rhyming a bar u rhymed two bars...
But since PERSONALS are what makes an entire battle..And is the Essense of battling M dogg Gets my vote...Good Match..Damn i feel like Judge Judy or someshit
Maestro Minded:
--- Quote from: Craig Equals Illest on December 27, 2002, 01:53:03 PM ---Alright..Here we go...First off i'm not the type to vote for someone because of slashes and complicated words..
If you have shit it has to make sense..And no offence very few of I-bos verse made sense.
I-bo's verse..
u must have amnesia, how else could you even "challenge-me"?//
if i was fighting the whole Elite, yall still woudnt "manage-me"//
Since when do challenge and manage rhyme?
knockin him out, likea boxer in the ring, witout even tuching my "curse-kit"//
And this means??
Im not dissing cuz i liked some of the multis..
its like fightin a kid, this battle is "stric-tly-un-balanced" | how much needed in handicap for you to be able to "give-me-a-challenge"//
I liked this line..Flowed good, nice multi..
like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious | claimin to be dope when u aint? fool, dont "fire-contra-dictionz"//
Another example of Not rhyming.. This line aint bad if u put like "like comics, your "power-is-a-fiction", illusionz illustrated by your unconscious visions" it would of made sense and rhymed well with the other multis and second bar.
call me "abstract", cuz no way for you to "tuch" my level | your biggets achievment would be: loosin this game without KO//
BTW T-O-U-C-H....and another example of non-sense..
--- End quote ---
i accept your vote and all.. i just need to say couple things...
1. all word does NOT need to rhyme... if it sound similar, its actually enough
if i check your battle against blade for example you rhymed "Action movie" with "Singh"~it~to~me" and "Sunoco~Anti~Freeze~Herb" with "Written~Police~Words"... not much diffrent from the rhymes i wrote when it comes to rhyming
2. an abstract thing is something you cant touch... and yes.. sometimes i spell it "tuch" .. sometimes i spell "rhymez, barz, illa', thangz.. etc etc...." ... its not all about correct grammatics
like i said... M-Dogg got his point.. but i just wanted to show you that your response aint legit
2-1...
keep voting
M Dogg™:
--- Quote from: .:TimeLock:. on December 27, 2002, 12:52:29 PM ---lol@ M-Dogg calling I-Bo playground names like "Do-Do" lmao ;D
--- End quote ---
LOL... actually, I messed up say Doe-Doe, which of course I'm talking about the actual bird, that went extinct because of it's stupitity more than anything. My bad.
Pillow:
This was a very good battle, i was very pleased. both came hard and nice but in tha end IBO took this one. IMO his overall verse was better. had harder punches and it flowed way nicer then M doggs, very nice battle, tha both u.
vote=IBO
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