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WCC Cup round 2... Kill vs. Koncept

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M Dogg™:
Deadly Gauge, the lines you pointed out were cool, but not the best that Kill had. Anyways, I'm the judge, and lets see.

Both sides came out nicely, and I liked both verse. Koncept had his shit, and he had good word play, something I ain't seen in a while. His rhymes were alright, and the punches where on point. Almost though, to much bragging, and not enough punching though, but that'll come overtime. Kill, was good too, nice punches (LOL, I like the Native American thing, though I was looking at Koncept before I found out he was Native, just liked his rhyming style) and desent rhymes. Word play was alright, but you kind of lost me a few times. Just a few though, but still vote=Koncept.

bLaDe:
Kill gets this, his rhyme was more complex and creative..Koncepts flowed better, but sum lines were kinda simple n shit....close tho..peace

vote - kill

  -{bLaDe}

Kill:
Tone, where u at ?

.:DayGoStyLz:.:
sorry fah tha delay yall

good shit by both, tight battle fah sho!

Koncept, u had a real nice verse man. U had tha better flow of tha 2 verses. Good attacking style. From tha first 2 bars, i thought u were gonna come off wack. Tha "gangsta/Shank-yah" rhyme...has been in rotation for about 35 years lol dont trip, ive used it mahself. But u made up for it by tha time u were finish. Real tight verse man. Only weakness, more metas.

Kill, u also came real tight. U didnt attack hard like Koncept, but u definetely had the better metas. Good creativity. Better vocab, although im not a HUGE fan of tha 'dictionary' shit. But u laced it thru the verse nicely. Sum pretty good multis in there also. He had the better flow then u, but i think u had tha more creative verse. Goos shit.

close battle yall, I hate to have tah vote against eitha verse...but sumbody gotta win.

Vote-Kill, i was jus feelin his a LIL bit more...but damn, good shit Koncept.

Kill:

--- Quote from: .:DayGoStyLz:. on January 11, 2003, 04:29:47 AM ---Kill, u also came real tight. U didnt attack hard like Koncept, but u definetely had the better metas. Good creativity. Better vocab, although im not a HUGE fan of tha 'dictionary' shit. But u laced it thru the verse nicely. Sum pretty good multis in there also. He had the better flow then u, but i think u had tha more creative verse. Goos shit.

--- End quote ---

Thanx for lettin me move on.......I understand that it wasn't easy to flow...as for the 'dictionary' style: it's not that I look up for the greatest fuckin words that exist and neglect the rhyme structure. Some people write verses based on vocab (Xearo for example, no offence though), I just try not to sound like

I'm killin-this-bitch cap-peelin-him-quick so he's feelin-this-shit

which includes nice multis, but also played-out rhymes (like gangsta/shank ya, bitch/snitch etc), cause voters will complain if you come off like this. To me the most important things are punches (especially personals), then multis, then vocab. Also I always try to make it at least possible to flow it to others, sometimes that might be difficult though...peace

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