Lyrically MenTally Challenged!! crAzy! (ill peep!!!!)feedback

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When I Get Heated At Wack Kats I Go Way Past Boiling
Wit A Twisted Esophogue Its Gonna Be Tuff Swallowin Muh Rat-Poisoning
That Dont Matter-I Still Leave Thease Thugs Slain
I Make Shapes And Gestures Directly From Your Blood Stains
Punch Ya Teeth Out Cha Mouth Leave You Wit A Slit Tongue And Bruised Gum
Make Ya Arteries Jump Out YA Skin And Ya Soul Wit Goose Bumps
I Got Fashionable Glocks I Create Hazards Wit Lots Of Havoc I'll Be Attackin The Block
Stab Through Ya Rib Cage Make Ya VOICE A Jack In Tha BOX
Visional Criminals Within My Mentallity Its Pitiful
Satanous Syllables Symbolizing Carnage In States Of Critical
I'm The King They're The Lioness My Life Juss Piles Shit
Jab Into My Soul The Knife n Twist
Time To Fit On My Boots n Shoot But I'mma Miss
Time Attempts To Rewind And Define Abyss
Tought To Learn Fought n Yearned For Distrought Returns
Fought With Words I'm Shot n Burned I Wanna Go To Heaven But It's Not my Turn
Your Face Goes From White Like Plain Thunder Clouds
You Better Hide Or You Will Be Forced To Remain Underground
I Am A Predator Not A Peddle I Use These Cowards As Prey
Shoot Ya Up At A Seven Eleven But Now Your Chest Is The Thing Open 24 Hours A Day
I Dont Regret My Kills I Give Ya Intestines A Spill
MOUNT Ya Skull On My Wall So You Can Really HEAD For The HILLS
I Stab So Many Kats I Admire How My Sword BLED
Hang You And Three Of Your Friends Cuz I'm A Serial Killer Goin After FOUR HEADS
Shove A Mic Up Your Ass Cuz You're STUCK UP Who Thinks He's The SHIT ON THE MIC
It'd Be Your Fantasy Faggot To Go To PRISON FOR LIFE
Slaughter Mothers Fathers Son's n Daughters But Didn't Need To Bother
Shove A Poll Up The Cooch Of A Hooch And Use The Ho As A Teeter Totter
Feed The Wiler ROTten Flesh Nox-i-ous Get Aids On Purpose
Rape Every Woman On Earth To Make Humans Extinct I Dont Have To Think It's Worth It
Could IT Be So Perfect Need To Serve This Worthless Verse With Murdered Words On The Scene
Crawl Up Your Ass And Look Thru Your Skull And Wear Your Body For Halloween
I Explode Lots Of Spectators When I Flow Hot Lemme Let These Hoes Rot
Wear Your Lungs As Gloves And Use Your Beating Heart As A Road Block
Its More Then Hatred Its And Emcee War
Lemme Unshealth Words That Sting Harder Then Unleashed Swords
I Can Speak Words Wit My Switch Blade I Spit The Fullest In Text
Its Gonna Be Tuff Survivin Usin A T Shirt As A Bullet Proof Vest
I Come Rough Wit Bars Hatin On Weak Kats Diminish The Soft
After I Feel Ya Heart Stop I Will Finish You Off
I'm Not Worried About Grudges Cuz Eventually Time
Venjance'll Find My Path And You'll Get Lenched With Ur Spine
Even Holdin Your Own Cock You Couldn't Be GRIPPIN A NINE
I Eat Led Shit Rhymes
See Dead My Heat's Embedded In Time
Kill You Off To Delete Future Generations
MURDERIN THE FUTRE Shoot Thru In The Heavens
Black Magic Like I'm 8 ON BALL Napalm Aimed To Take On Gawd