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Gay-o Felony:


Time for a new start, a fresh set of memories, the beginning of a new me//
Then my brain went through pressure back to the future, and regretful memories returned to me//
Like a small spark triggers a fire, my slight revealment of words prevailed into tradegy suddenly//
YOU ask me those questions, like they fuckin scared my memory, like im gonna remember//
Its old news, like your ex-personality, you've changed, i thought you were to be trusted, just a pretender//
A friend gradually turns to enemy, keepin' em closer, the phrase suddenly makes me suspicious//
Like i had a life before this one, and the phrase was to worn me this time, im so curious//
I'll keep my head low, even then i draw more attention than a military artist, nowadays gotta be tactical// [1]
Gotta live your life how you wanna, but im not gone be drastical, ima be practical, lifes made by other people, they make the decision in my head//
Wont come true, but the only time they realise, they shoulda stopped when they had the chance..... when im dead!//

Explanations:

1 = Draw = Artist / Attention = Army Technique, see the combination!?

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.:TimeLock:.:
this shit is mad confusing at points, like u can make up your mind what it is u want to say.. humm is that why u call yourself that?

Koncept:
don't know whats the matter with my friend timelock over here, but i was feelin' it

Kill:
lyrically it could be worked on and it had me lost a few times, but overall it was a nice spit

Gay-o Felony:
I know its confuses people, but its just me getting some shit off ma chest thts  all.. it was bout a friend bringin' back dug up memories going way back, i tell him shit, he goes behind my trust and splirts it all out!


Ind3cisiv3 - Timelock, they do call me Ind3cisiv3 for that reason yes, coz 1 minute im happy, the next im not, my emotions dont decide!

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