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IbblesAndBits:
--- Quote from: Infinite- African West Coastin' 2010 on July 10, 2011, 06:59:32 PM ---Song: "Spiritual Breakdown" (Arab Gulf 07')
Artist: Infinite solo
Production: Unknown
Lyrics: Taken from a journal entry I made in Jan. 07' while living in the Arab Gulf
http://www.youtube.com/v/Kl4snhK57ro?version=3&hl=en_US&rel=0
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This one's got a dope ass beat, and your delivery and flow here is better than on the other songs. Keep working on it man.
TraceOneInfinite:
--- Quote from: IbblesAndBits on July 10, 2011, 09:18:38 PM ---
--- Quote from: Infinite- African West Coastin' 2010 on July 10, 2011, 06:59:32 PM ---Song: "Spiritual Breakdown" (Arab Gulf 07')
Artist: Infinite solo
Production: Unknown
Lyrics: Taken from a journal entry I made in Jan. 07' while living in the Arab Gulf
http://www.youtube.com/v/Kl4snhK57ro?version=3&hl=en_US&rel=0
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This one's got a dope ass beat, and your delivery and flow here is better than on the other songs. Keep working on it man.
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Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I felt an improvement in the way this track came together, from the flow, delivery, layering, and mixing. The lyrics are kind of similar to "The Depression Track" but with an Arab twist, so the beat is a perfect match because the sample on the chorus is beautiful with "Ride over the sand/over and over again".
It's easily my favorite amateur beat of all time, I could just listen to that beat alone on repeat over and over and never get tired of it. It's enchanting, mystical.
TraceOneInfinite:
--- Quote from: Your favorite posters favorite poster on July 10, 2011, 07:45:33 PM ---Like someone else in this thread said, I really think you should focus on spoken word instead of rap. Rap isn't your thing because it just isn't your flow thats wack, it's basically every technical aspect of being an emcee. I think if you did spoken word you would be better to convey your emotion instead of being confined to staying with the beat, just my honest 2 cents.
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Thanks for the feedback, and like I said, maybe later I will check out spoken word, but this album is already in the can homie... This shit is like 10 years in the making so I might as well put the finishing touches on it and put it out for whatever it's worth.
Sccit:
^lol, dont take that shit seriously, they just wanna say whatever they can 2 bring u down...if u like rappin, rap and ull keep improvin with every track...spoken word is somethin completely different.
as for ur new track, thats the 1 dopest uv posted yet...like dude above me said, ur delivery and everything seemed a better on this 1, and the beat was def nice. 8)
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