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gods saviour:
i burn you to a crisp wit my "flame thrower"/
i aint no star, but a "game grower"/
ya'll fake niggas be "lame showers"/
im making yall fall down like the twin "towers"/


first rap, what do yall think?

gods saviour:
any suggestions?

Koncept:
make your shit longer (more lines/bars) and the middle lines didn't make sence to me

Entreri117:

--- Quote from: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 05:07:23 PM ---any suggestions?

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Yeah...don't rap anymore...LOL

__kaLipZo__:

--- Quote from: Xear0 on January 25, 2003, 08:29:31 PM ---
--- Quote from: gods saviour on January 25, 2003, 05:07:23 PM ---any suggestions?

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Yeah...don't rap anymore...LOL

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word...

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