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Prime's Getaway

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Koncept:
standing on the corner during a dry hot day//
my boy prime was tiring to lay some paper away//
when a car rolled up to his place with unfamiliar plates and a new face//
they asked for an eighth, got it and drove away//
next thing you know a van screeches to a stop//
oh shit, he'd been set up by the cops//
a group of deep blue charges onto the scene//
prime's already ran a block, fuck the pain in his spleen//
in his waist he placed a glock just in case for this type of a thing//
he starts to believe he might have to squeeze, but that's just the adrenalin talking//
his hart races as he's fighting to fill his lungs, he's killing him self for some ones//
but he still runs, thinking he can beat the police, thinking of his mama and niece//
he sprints to parking lot, but 5-0's still close, now he's thinking survival//
he runs until he meets a brick wall, asthma acting up, he's ready to fall//
he turns and sees three police officers armed to the teeth//
struggling to breath, he still can't admit defeat//
they're screaming, "drop to your knees", all he hears is his hart beat//
in a haze he reaches for his glock and his body just drops//
it's too late, he's already been shot...

laying on the ground with yellow ribbon all around, the blood soaks his white shirt red//
two slugs in the chest, one in the head, at his funeral, "he will be remembered" is what the preacher said//  
no one shed a tear for the reason he died, everyone was somber while his momma cried//
prime lived his life, he made a sacrifice, don't let the money run your lives//  



if i get positive feedback i'll write more storys
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__kaLipZo__:
i was really likin that fo some reason, flowed well and had a deep side to it, nice lil story theme, keep writin homez

M Dogg™:
damn... this is mos def a strong point in your writings. Even if people don't respond, keep writing for yourself, 'cause you never know when you'll drop a straight classic. Good job man, I liked that.

Gay-o Felony:
lol.. i find it funny sometimes when peeps "praise" they crews spits more coz they with em.. than normally... lol  ;D

Koncept:
whatever

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