Elite Vs. Ex - Soldjahz : 3 v 3

[__kaLipZo__]

10-15 bars per member
Elite : Rippa, Koncept, Kalipzo

Ex - Soldjahz : Assassin, Indecisive, Pimpdogg

3-0 = Ko
1st to 4 wins
verses due my monday
post when you want, start checkin in

[Gay-o Felony]

As i enta.....

Kalipzo gone melt unda the "lime-light", study 5 chapters of Rappin for idiots, then come up with "prime-shite// Hope ya linez more entertaining than the jokes i come up bout ya name, if your "times-right" make ya "ryhmes-tight"// Kalipzo da "skitzo" thinkin' he a "key playa" in "Elite" but ima "g slaya" think you dope, "shit-no" into deep, so do what ya crew usual does, "Retreat"// Except "Defeat" coz "Rippa" rises as far as testies, when you caught em in the "Zippa" you a "Newbie"// n Koncept, to risky, needin more maintenance than he "Use-to-need", lemme guess, with your blunt nine, ima "Suppose-to-bleed"?//

Rippa the Rookie, crumblin' under the pressure, actin blacker, than a chocolate chip cookie// Kalipzo the dippy foe, colder than ice, moldier than fries, shoved up a dirty hoe// Koncept aint won 1 yet, erased of talent specs, 3rd round comin, will rip him "none-the-less"// "son-dont-test", ima deliver quicker than "UPS", makin you shocked, rattle n quiver// We dawgs dont need a 2nd chance, we share the same quality, make you scam without a 2nd glance// Aint gotta chance, aint qualifying to diss us, you pants// Except "Defeat" ex - soldjahz beat "Elite" fair n square// Bring ya best, so atleast i can call this a contest, like Bravo Television, we jus "Laid You Bare"// [1]

Explanations:

[1] Laid Bare: A Pornographic programme on a british channel called Bravo...

[@Ss@sSiN]

@ss@ssin
Ex-Soldjahz
These cats holding bars? maybe baby ruth/
They crew falling off quick, like a babys tooth/
Ex-Soldjahz made the turth,@ss@Ssin blazed the roof/
Koncept riding on kalipzo, this the ho train/
And just for these three cowards ima spit some more game/

Switch Styles

Elite by far aint on top of the game, i bring pain like jews in the holocaust, remember my name/
Im scaring as soon as you came, tried to diss but you was just slain/
And now these 3 wanna try poppin' some shit, that little shit wit rippa stright off a script/
You all some hollywood pricks, stright up these 3 poster boy material/
But still ex-soldjahz remain imperial, gats wit scratched out serials, kevlar my crews material/
Im quick to draw first blood in this crew battle presentation, watch these 3 homo's take it in the ass wit out debating/
Stop and waitin', making sure that no one witnesses they actions 'in the rear'/
They played cloud 9 but now you bitches will fear, the wrath of the microphone assassin/
So listen up, grab ya gat fixed for blasting, you dirt napping/
This my last bar bitches so sigh wit relief, continue gunning, im comming wit grief/

[Gay-o Felony]

you bet...we'll see whos laughing at the end...i might wait allllllll the way till monday (due date) to post just for u!

^^ and the way you said that, seeps fear into my body.. Oooooooooweeeeeeee... lol yea you wait til monday if it takes you that long to get ya finga out ya ass, and ya brain in gear.. you might actually rip someone other than paper!

See ya soon! hahaha..

[Koncept]

thiis is the realm of the wizard//{1}
lyrical blizzard up in your hizzard//{2}

*word*

I eliminate this long forgotten troop "with the wrench in the ball room" and they still don't have a "clue"//{3}
ya whole crew invisible,  I see through you individuals, assassin I created you, where's my residuals//{4}
it's pay back time guaranteed, when I rip out your spleen just to watch you bleed, then kill the first EMT who arrives on the scene//{5}
yes indeed, I'm mean mother fucker, "pimp", battle me, you'll be leaving with a genuine gangster limp//{6}
oh my god, elite let a prankster in, start partyin', Koncept the funk guardian, got you groovin' to words, it's so absurd//{7}
what I do with the spoken word, ohhh nooo, indy hates homos but he's "grading on the curve", any other crews step up to get served//{8}
Lyrical contests is where Koncept performs best, it's all frendy fire except you forgot your vest//{9}
I get no sleep cuz the wicked never rest, E-S couldn't pass the elite test, now we defeat the rest//{10}
Taking sanity and transporting you to a land of fantasy with dragons and magic//{11}
or a futuristic bloody battle field where machinery meets close combat tactics//{12}
I leave MCs in trunks in attics because my  judgment is spastic//{13}
fuck it's over, ex solders done had it//{14}


everyone was pressuring me to write when the due date isn't till monday. normaly i'd have wated until sonday to write it but it's for the crew i guess


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[__kaLipZo__]

:Its a Dark night in a wooded area, as 4 Soliders come upon a trench
full of armed Elite members, :gunshots: Indecisive is wounded, looks at his
boyfriend pimp, but death overcomes him, Assassin pulls out his grenade,
drops grenadee and throws pin, Ex - Soldjahz is defeated by themselves again:

Left, left, left right left
Elite is kwown only for the best
so all newbie clans, please dont test
Left, left, left right left

These "soldiers" army is depl-eted, 4 fags in pink camo, looks like one "gay-orgy" compl-eted//~
Indy's bent over gettin "dick-beated", while Assassin takes PImp's dick, "Fully-inserted"//~
If ya skills represented ya penis-length, you wouldnt "amount-to-nothing"//~
You gays say Kal's a newbie, but at least I dont use a flash-light "to-sing"//~
If this crews talent was-measured by a ruler, they'd be inch-less//~
Im leavin this crew embarrassed, like when Deadly's mom had syphilis//~
Afta this battle you 3 will be "crew-less", wannabe in ELITE? but we dont accept your "gay-ness"//~
LimpDogg's eatin Indy's "salad" and its bout to bleed, due to not one, but ten STD's//~
I can name any "disease", from "herpes" to "snatch-flees", Pimp's Mom - saying "yes-please"//~
The only-fan Indy's got is on tha-"Ceiling", walked into a gay-parade, took it as appealin//~
As his crew couldn't lay "Dope-lines" if they were ~drug-dealin~, 11 bars dropped, "defeat" is what EX is-feelin//~
Deadly's a gangsta?, ~foolz~,  he wears "Aero" shirts to school, while Dj Lost handles his-"tool"//~[1]
With his "hands-on" exper-ience, in this battle "winning" is the only differ-ence//~
That "distance-s", us from the "no-talents", Soldjahz tryin to hold-on, but no-"balance"//~
So called soldiers lost they "battle-stance", them winning this battle...not-a-chance//~

Left, left, left right left
Elite is kwown only for the best
so all newbie clans, please dont test
Left, left, left right left

[1] Im always seein Assassin wearin Aeropostale shirts to school...lol

[Rippa]

--ONE STORMY DARK NIGHT INDY, ASSASSIN AND PIMPDOGG ALL OF A SUDDEN THEY ALL START FEELIN THE WRATH FROM RIPPA..

Indesive is in his Car drive in the INDY 187.. in car numbr 666.. he puts on radio n it gets static.. it starts to clear up n Rippa Spits about him.. puttin a DEATH spell on him

indy your bout to *go down faster* then when u sees Assassins*erect dick*, Trynna *fuck with me*, cuz your to pussy to get *a head quick*/1
Nicca u couldnt *rip ass* if u worked at a slaughterhouse for *mules*, Indy* your droppin shit*, cuz your asshole's pounded *loose*/2
i'll split ya skull and *air out ya brain*, just to Blow ya fuckin *mind*, ya *joints are rotten*, n u trynna run with the big boys, ya Far *behind*, Gay sex after the club is the only time indy ever *cocked a 9*/3
* your outta line*, like a retarted kid with a coloring *book*, so your about to get hit with My thundering *hook* for trynna steal punches, fuckin *crook*/4
ill put my hand through ya chest and smash ya heart *to hit a beat*,*crack u open*, hollow u out, roll u and smoke ya *like a swisher sweet*, ill rip ya feet off ya ankles n yell *KICK IT!!!*, step *with it*, ill stab indy in the *voice box with fence *picket* to keep indy quiet like a *legless cricket*/5
Total bars= 5
INDY losses control of the car n flys into a Wall and dies..

PimpDogg walks the block n sees a bytch n she says hey listen to diz n he puts the head phones on n hears static den it clears in n Rippa speaks

Ayo

Pimpdogg.. i might *slap the shit outta you*, but that would leave u *hollow*/1
i'd rather *punch u to death* like when drago beat *apollo*(drago punched apollo to death in the movice rocky)/2
I'm a movado, your a twenty dollar *seiko*, to *Catch a beat*, ill fatally rip pimpdoggs heart out like *kano*( kano's finishin move in mortal kombat)/3
u wont be able to *kick it* or *throw jabs* when i cut off ya *hands n Toes*, pimpdogg rep's *rainbows*, ill sew ya mouth shut just so u *cant blow*(faggot)/4
Leave u *diss-abled*, *rip ya legs out the socket* like a broken *table*, drown u with frozen flows, u aint jack, and this aint titanic, NO 1 WILL SAVE U!!/5
ill *rape u* with a *hard post* so hard it'll blow through ya *navel*, you'll be another trophy on my shelf when i *personally in grave you*(R.i.p)/6
Total bars= 6

The bytch flips out n puts powder on her hand n pimp slaps pimpdogg to death

Last...

Assassin Gives a Speech to everybody. n Rippa stand in the hidden trees with his SNipa Talents he Points da Red beam on Assassins head n Says to him self

Damn..

Assassin wat was u thinkin?.. u couldnt be *5 time better* if i was washington and u was *lincon*( 5 dolla bill and 1 dolla bill)/1
Sware u hard but befare u die, like *anerestic lions*, and ill leave him *throwen up his pride*/2
im *tighter* at a *lower level* like *virgin dutches*,like *grim reeper grips*, you *feelin with death touches*/3
knockin assassin without *hunches*, like *invisiable sparing partners*, you *cant see da Punches*/4
Assassin's *wack at it*, to *sum* dis up im *eatin* him like *canibalistic mathmatics*/5
he's bout to feel my bullet from my lyrical sniper *weapon*, and its *to late to protect his self* like *tina turner taking boxin lessons*/6 Total bars= 6

Rippa slowly Pulls the Tigger n the bullet breaks threw Assassins skin but he was dead before it him from Rippas Force of punchs to his abdomen..

YALL JUST GOT *ATE UP QUICKER* DAN A GANG OF *ZOMBIE* CLONES OF *MIKE TYSON*!!!!!

Total bars= 5+6+6=17 bars...

[Pimpdogg]

who's stalling

Oh you motherfuckers been waiting for me, when I'm done you'll wish it was just 2 on 3//
Because @ss@ssin and indecisive, have already beat you twice with//
Their superior rhyme skill, and you want the Pimpdogg still//
Well you better pop a pill, cause I'm about to make your head ache//
And show Lost Angel that he needs to dump this dead weight//
First target of my hate is the so-called elite sniper//
Rippa, he uses Kalipzo's dick for an ass wiper//
But Koncept don't need that he just goes straight in a diaper//
Because Lost Angel's dicked his ass so much it's past preservation//
And those fags are best off returning to the reservation//
So there's the gay sniper, the boy in the diaper, and, oh yeah the rhyme biter//
Kalipz-ho, with your rhymes you know you're not the writer//
Whenever you're around rhymebooks start getting lighter//
Around elite my grasp grows tighter, those bitches being choked up//
Oh shit did you just see that, elite got smoked up//

well there you go xearo, you've been waiting to tear it apart so go ahead.

oh and 'game recognises game' you wouldn't recognise game if it walked up to you wearing a badge saying 'hello, my name is game' and introduced itself to you, you dumb fuck.

['Illicit']

chill out dawg, ima vote

Ex-Soldjahz:

Indy: shit was tight dawg. nice punches in em, great flow, had me goin throughout the whole readin process.
I'll rate it a 4.5/5

Assassin: Good shit as usual, but I've seen you do better homie. some lines were a lil below ur standard punches. still good cuz I felt a lil enthusiasm but I gotta vote on a battle so I only see it as a 4/5

PimpDogg: well, the flow was very good imo, but some punches were played out, funny tho but just not hard hittin enough. I only give it a 3.8/5


Elite:

Koncept: nice shit, nice. good punches, flow was good. not really some witty metaz but you didnt fuck it up by spittin the rough shit.
I'll give it a 4.2/5

Kalipzo: tight piece. I liked the  dope-lines line. good flow, some good multis and hard punches overall. a 4.1/5

Rippa: oh boy, what a rhyme. tight as hell. all three verses, metaphor king. off the hook punches and flawless flow. near perfect. a definite 4.8/5


Ex-Soldjahz: 12.3
Elite: 13.1

Elite took this one

[Kill]

^^^^^^^his ratings are way different from mine, so don't think a 3.5/5 means you were wack....

Most of y'all came better than I'd have thought actually

Indy: This was prolly the best rhyme I've seen from you in a long while; you had some nice multies and even though the structure was kinda confusing at times it flowed nicely and hit pretty well...4.1/5

assassin: Flow was kinda off to me, I've seen better from you but it wasn't bad. You had some nice rhymes and punches too, but it wasn't as good as Indy's...btw, the Jews were victims to the holocaust...3.6/5

pimpdogg: You had some nice lines but alot of it was kinda average, some shit was played. Not wack though, but you lacked hard punches and really tight rhymes. Flow was aight...3.3/5

EX-SOLDJAHZ OVERALL SCORE (AVERAGE) = 3.66/5






Koncept: Your rhymes were pretty nice, but the structure was confusing to me, so I couldn't flow it well. The metas and punches were pretty good and hard-hittin, nice vocab...3.9/5

Kalipzo: You didn't come that tight with the rhymes but the dope punches made up for that. Your flow wasn't bad, overall pretty tight verse...3.9/5

Rippa: You had the best verse of all, flow was sometimes a bit off but appart from that you really killed it with some hard ass punches...4.4/5

ELITE OVERALL SCORE (AVERAGE) = 4.06/5





VOTE = ELITE

[Gay-o Felony]

Look...


Rippa, i aint gone start beef... i wanna settle shit.. i dont think your whack... but listen.. this jus' net talk.. not fuckin real life grudges... so peace dawg...

Good verse too man! and no this aint a suck up, but i got betta things and more important things on my mind than argueing..

Uppin for mo'votes!

I aint loosing faith, but looks like Elite gone take this one, but we put up a good battle soldjahz!

[Pimpdogg]

this may seem like a stupid question, but kill and illicit what do you mean by saying some of my punches are played out? I really don't understand. Can anyone help me it's the only way I'll learn.

[Koncept]

there punches that get used often, ones that everyone uses...lol

try to be more creative with punches

[Pimpdogg]

thanks man, much appreciated.

[Kill]

yeah, played out = already used too often. Just try to make up punches people haven't seen yet...