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bLaDe

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first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« on: October 04, 2001, 10:37:19 PM »
yea this is my first ever battle ryme, i'm a poet but i dont usually spit ... anyways check it and only rookies reply like me  ;D
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yo check it check it//
blade is back in da house//
gotta bitch slap u and put a dick in ure mouth//
shake da world, move it up n down//
gonna boom in ure face u little clown//
make u gobble a dick, make ure face frown//
yo dis is ma ryme, check it check it,
goin on 24/7, like a broken record/
gonna sick my doawg on ure balls//
gonna cut u up, make u suck ure toes//
gimme respect, i demand it//
make u lick my ass, can u understand it?//
this is my house, im da cat, u da mouse...
oh o iz the lyrical masta//
stab me at the back? gonna thro it rite back at ya//
so heres ure last chance ta//
get da fuck ouuta here//
run everybody run! //
da lyrical champ is here, fuck off son//
i'll kill u wid my rymes, dont need no sub machine gun//
verse after verse//
every ryme is da worst//
betta than fred durst//
rymes like a curse//
haha i whoop ure azz first//
into flames u will burst//
in acid ure head i will immerse//
and watch ure brain bust//
no body can save u, not a doctor, not a nurse//
see i'm da lyrical, undefeatable playa//
u can't touch my rymes,  haha see nuthin there//
hey watch ure breath, it might fall tryin to do wud i did//
need to gro up more, ya little stupid kid//
ryming like me? haha dont be silly//
i'll fuck u up n down u hillybilly/
i'm writin lyrics like bullets//
so fast u cant see it//
it'll bust yo chest//
giv u a cardiact arrest//
make u  choke like a nigga asmatic//
how many times did i bust you?//
i lost count, gotta work on ma mathamatics//
hahah relax  yo self//
betta watch yo self//
i'm walkin around on full stealth//
u tryin to hit me from behind? //
i move faster than yo eyez, faster than ure mind//
take my advice...and step down to me//
this is  my  blasphemy, bow down to me//
i'm the king ure the pauper, can't u see?//
i'm ure lyrical god//
the ryming saint//
on ure knees u fuccin dog//
hear my rymes, and u will faint//
now cummon, step up to this and i'll bust ure lip//
blow ure brains, get yo ass kicked...//
step on my turf, the earth will shake//
lava will boil ... buildings will fall//
face my wrath, get da fucc outta here 4 ure own sake!//
i'll fuck u up no matter if ure fat, thin, a bitch or tall...//
so take ma advice...run boy ..run...or imma gonna stomp on ure balls..//

--bLaDe ...

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hmmm i think i forgot sumthin...but i'll save it for next...


peace ...


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Re: first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2001, 03:12:04 AM »
not bad, alot of shit that's been said over and over, get more creative, peace.
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2003, 10:38:03 PM »
Now...look at blade
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2003, 11:56:05 PM »
Not Bad Blade......NOT BAD......

But HORRIBLE......lol

Damm when waz this? 10 years ago? lmao
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2003, 02:08:49 AM »
yo keep it up man ....
i see great things ahead for ya...
lol ..
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #5 on: February 09, 2003, 09:51:07 AM »
dayum, don't judge newbies to mercilessly no more, you see how much better sumbody can get...not that this verse was that wack, but compare it to the shit BlaDe came up with later

HE MUST BE A BITER !!!!!! ;D
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #6 on: February 09, 2003, 11:23:09 AM »
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2003, 03:22:34 PM »
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2003, 05:05:56 PM »
dont yall see when this thread was first posted?   lol treatin him like a rookie
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #9 on: February 09, 2003, 06:01:32 PM »
I brought it up to see...how blade has progressed to the present day...
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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #10 on: February 09, 2003, 06:38:49 PM »
LMAO, that was my first rhyme I EVER made, I used half of it against AlerG[who kicked my ass] in the first WCC tourniment who Maxi Padz judged.  Damn brings back memories, I used to be hella enthusiastic and shit.  Thanks for uppin it ;)

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Re:first time ryme, check it yo, 4 starters tho
« Reply #11 on: February 09, 2003, 06:46:41 PM »
Quote from: .:[b L a D e]:. on February 09, 2003, 06:38:49 PM
LMAO, that was my first rhyme I EVER made, I used half of it against AlerG[who kicked my ass] in the first WCC tourniment who Maxi Padz judged.  Damn brings back memories, I used to be hella enthusiastic and shit.  Thanks for uppin it ;)

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Anytime...i was just checkin old posts from the times where i wasnt here and saw this and was like hmm...lookie at blade now, progressin, doin audio, =)
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