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I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)

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Inspectah:
*Biterz Mind*

I could pretend im writing, or spend time biting, whats better, copying n pasting, or not elevatin?//
Im whack, so ima bite a track, take out a gap, to make it big enough, to fit it in the voterz trapz//
They vote? or sit down like me and take notes?//
No one gone find me guilty, my conscience hopes//

*Inspectah*

i interupt-n-jam, stop the signal, lost contact with the person you trying to corupt-n-skam//
watch me abduct-this-man, i'll bring heat, revealing your weakness n saw spot, which i conduct-from-hands//
i interogate-in-silence, you refuse to co-operate, i'll manipulate-with-violence, dont fuck with my tolorence//

*Biter*

Got evidence-to-prove? any fuckin' documents thats gone be any relevent-to-use?//
To damn confident-to-loose, ima call ya bluff then be overdominate-for-you-to-abuse//
Let me illiminate-and-choose, gimme a chance to prove my innocence, or you gone just, discriminate-and-bruise?//
My conscience til break-down, i will give you my doggy eyes, and my fake-frown, gimme a chance...//

*Inspectah*

..interuption, lemme finish where ya started, wouldnt give you the time of day, not even a second glance//
Shitting ya self now? change-ya-pants, got the jury hollaring "guilty" i wonder why? explain-those-chants!//
"Order Order" your restricted-of-options, bout to loose this case, so take one last breathe of freedom, now-the-fate//
We gotten so close since we i predicted-your-conscience, i got to you so much, i mite get closer and be your soul-mate//


Feedback Please, ^^ first time i really used multis!

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Kill:
one of the tightest verses I've seen by a newbie in a while...I really liked it, keep it up

Inspectah:
^^ Thankz Homicide...

Bumpin' a few topics ahead! :)

More feedback please!

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Inspectah:
*Bump*

'Illicit':
lol damn, your first rhyme usin multis?? if so,  it took me ages to get a lil good at em, and its still hard as fuck for me.  

but verrry nice piece homie.

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