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FCUKIN READ!"!!!!

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ILLPrOpHeCy:
Im sick of this shit comin to you harder than a dick thats pussy whipped
im new i dont-get-praise yall gasface me and leave me in-a-daze
im an atheist and your a priest you need me like bread needs yeast
i do this shit coz im bored sat here caged like a beast waiting for his feast
come near me ill savage ya verse with my beat
give ya mam a little meat screaming like a mammal on heat

                         *FLIPS THA BEAT*

im just warming up coming to you with a new style yall never encountered before
im ill as fuck hense the name illprophecy i swear i aint playing this aint no game
if you diss ill leave you on the floor screaming like a girl with period pains
this is verbal retaliation for bak then wen i got no feedback that i needback
Dead On Arrival is my clan name shame you busting us we bustin back so kids dance to this track or analyze mah rap
before you get trashed-smacked-clapped and thats that

ILLPrOpHeCy:
GRRRRRRR that woz weak
i tried a diff style
feedback neways  wud be apreciated

Inspectah:
Not bad, i see your using multi's but i think they need a little work, i mean i used to be whack at em.. but now they seem to flow...

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Reef:

--- Quote from: Inspectah on February 18, 2003, 02:27:17 PM ---Not bad, i see your using multi's but i think they need a little work, i mean i used to be whack at em.. but now they seem to flow...

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Word..

Its not bad... but its not dope... Jus try n keep on improvin..

'Illicit':
well might not've been a str8 10, but i see ur tryin hard to get it right, which can only mean you will in time elevate to a good point of where you can write some dope shit.

keep it up homie

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