Author Topic: I:// Multi'z... (Read 265 times)

Inspectah · « **on:** February 27, 2003, 08:51:00 AM »

Ayo.. ima jus' experiment with the barz filled with pure multis, and see if it works and makes sense..

"words~ta~snatch" like when "cats~dispatch" looking for "birds~to~catch"//
Shitting n "turds~ta~hatch" "birth~of~fresh~beats" never "heard~this~batch"//
Suck this "gurth~of~flesh~n~meat" gotcha "biting~like~a~hobbie"//
...ya "play~groud~legend" coz ya "fighting~with~noddie"//
So "stay~around~instead~n" fuck around "siking~out~my~buddies"//

Thats all for now folks.. lol jus thought i would post this up.. coz some of it funny.. .lol feedback on this ^^ Real Shit.. lol.

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'Illicit' · « **Reply #1 on:** February 27, 2003, 09:58:17 AM »

some of em didnt fit, but a nice short lil story there homie lol. but i aint the multi expert so you may disregard my opinion.

Inspectah · « **Reply #2 on:** February 27, 2003, 10:14:38 AM »

Thnx for the comments Illicit, some of em were a lil whack coz i was so bored, i was jus sorta freetyling these multis as quick as i can, and then lastly looking if it all makes sense! But ya'll know i better than that lil key! lol

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Kill · « **Reply #3 on:** February 27, 2003, 12:28:40 PM »

I agree with Illicit

MasterOfCeremonies · « **Reply #4 on:** February 27, 2003, 03:32:18 PM »

shit was not bad man... im pretty good at multis... so i can help you out... first off, you always want to have the number of syllables match... if your rhyming 4 syllables, make sure your next rhyme has 4 syllables, throwing one extra syllable in can throw the flow off. and on another tip, you dont want to like force your multis... i see some heads around here, and on other sites, just fighting to make their rhymes have multis, but they are done sloppily with too many words to fit into a short multi... just try to keep your multis smooth, and just let em flow out your mouth hella clean... shit was pretty good tho homie... keep it up

Inspectah · « **Reply #5 on:** February 28, 2003, 02:45:13 AM »

Ayo thnx dawg, well this shit was jus a lil quick spit, to see how fast i could think of multis... lol hoping it would make sense too! Thanx for the advice tho!

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