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Jazzin...
Inspectah:
^^ this some nice shit dawg.. some dope newbies. entarin this board....
~ 1 ~ nice keep flowin...
Kill:
--- Quote from: Jemuel on March 01, 2003, 12:41:22 PM ---
--- Quote from: Kill on March 01, 2003, 08:53:24 AM ---usin your way of judgn like a 1.6/5...
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It ant my fault he ripped you... Your flow sucked anyway, I was bein polite...
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My flow sucked ? Most people will agree with me on Rippa's havin been harder to flow, but fuck that. Look man, sayin I'm wack you're a lil too late. 2 of the 3 heavyweight champs in WCC history labeled me a heavyweight, all of them wanted me in their crews, I've been holdin the middleweight belt since 09/27/02, defending it 4 times, KO'in a hall of famer etc...point is, I'm not braggin and nuthin but all that is kinda more important to my self-confidence than sum newbie who dropped shit on a level I consider at least 10 MC's on this board (including myself) capable of writin on comin up callin me wack. Sorry
And yes, he did rip me accordin to you but his verse got a 2.5/5, hence it was pretty bad too. And i'm sorry to say that (naw, actually I'm not), goin from what you've shown you are not better. Think I couldn't rhyme "vibe" with "eyes" ? C'mon, it ain't even a rhyme really
I won't contradict myself; your shit was nice. That's it. Nice. Not sum dope ass heat, nice
Kill:
Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...
*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*
--- Quote ---Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
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Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way
--- Quote ---Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
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Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive
--- Quote ---Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl
--- End quote ---
again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?
--- Quote ---Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
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why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"
Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL
__kaLipZo__:
--- Quote from: Kill on March 01, 2003, 04:45:54 PM ---Pero a lo mejor tienes algunos problemas con la pronunciacion ingles (sorry, there's no accents on my keyboard). Porque...
*smartass Kill got nuthin to do and starts to dissect that verse*
--- Quote ---Sittin-back-an'-Maxin, To smooth Jazz-sounds...
Rappin-fact-an'-lapsin, Starbux cruisin my veins, passed-out...
--- End quote ---
Why are you addin "sittin" and "rappin" to your word chains when they don't rhyme at all ? You don't have to make it look longer that way
--- Quote ---Unconsiously writin my fingertips tappin-away...
Slappin-my-face, with New Orleans rhythm snappin-my-sway...
Trapped in a trance thinkin of a Women who's-mine...
True-ties with lyrical justice, couldn't compare to her eyes...
Powerhouse trumpets, strummin what is the chillest vibe...
The "realest" listen an cant hide, from Nats way to confide...
--- End quote ---
Aight, this is where you fuck up ya whole flow...after rhymin the "app"-words with away, face and sway (not really immaculate either) you say "trapped-in-a-TRANCE", which destroys the whole multie-based structure, cause "trapped-in-a-TRACE" wouldn't make much sense, eh ? Then there's no multies no more, all of a sudden, and you rhyme "eyes" with "mine", "ties" and "vibe"...how impressive
--- Quote ---Cool and collected, dressin and impressin-This-world...
Sax grazin tracks, even the wax is-checkin-its-whirl
--- End quote ---
again, how the fuck is that "is" connected with the rest of it ?
--- Quote ---Piano comes in, drummin it's own-percussion...
Stirring eyes, Billy Holiday's proned-discussion...
Miles Davis...The best is yet to come, and Wont-it-be-Fly?
Sonnets-derived from louisinna steet's, seasoned cry....
--- End quote ---
why the fuck do you think does "sonnet" have a DOUBLE-n ? Yes, cause that makes the pronounciation different from what it would be if it was "sonet" with a single n...and no, the way it is it does not rhyme with "won't-it" cause for bthat it'd have to be "sonet"
Fa real, I have to re-rate this...It don't deserve such a high rating. Que puta mierda has escribido, bein merciful I give this a 1.1/10...LOL
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Jem...
Just...
Got...
Bitched...
'Illicit':
LOL this is funny.
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