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Topic: another keystyle (Read 173 times)
abstruse
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 335
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another keystyle
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March 09, 2003, 04:24:25 PM »
mah bad about it bein small and stuff whatever, gimme feedback.
ya dont *realize* whos who till real shit-goes-down /
*sterilize* ya own mind till ya alone, wit no one around /
so how we truely know when a friendships-been-found /
unable to *prophecise* the period when friends-become-unbound /
well that days here, dont come within inch, nevah stand near /
the brother-love we had, has now dissapeared /
we was close *spiritually*, finishin eachothers sentence /
now to know *mentally*, that you was all pretense /
hard to think mah beloved-brother /
is now my hated-*enemy* /
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|JEM|ILL|
Muthafuckin' Double OG
Posts: 572
Karma: -6
...Compare to me, PLEASE...
Re:another keystyle
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March 09, 2003, 05:44:33 PM »
horrible...no flow...you need work kid.
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·SiNiStEr·
Tex
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 1522
Karma: -9
is this mic on?
Re:another keystyle
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March 09, 2003, 05:51:13 PM »
not many multis, extremely hard to understand, ya had no title and u didnt get a point across.
u have potential just put yo shit together and get a new vocabulary.
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abstruse
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Re:another keystyle
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March 09, 2003, 05:54:29 PM »
at least you honest. thnx for that.
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TheSheriff
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Re:another keystyle
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March 09, 2003, 05:57:24 PM »
Not horrific, not great. Average 1.5-2/5
A bit simplistic
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