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Inspectah:

Breathing heavily, steadily tredding my path of mental exctasy, know how im feeling?//
These emotions gots meanings, heres some empathy, trying to relax, im breaking down//
So i need the facts, coz thoughts got a head of me, its got to me, look my gaping frown//
Showing fear, nerves, tears, im disturbed, releaving myself through humorous jokes//
Count down 2 the day, when walkways, croud with a surgery bed and numerous clokes//
Hit me in reality mode, goose bumps appear, like i react to the cold, no relaxation//
Whats the outcome gone be?, NOW has come for me, ima accept my situation//
I just gotta lotta thoughts that krept a head of me, take one final breath with me//
Coz im out cold til i awake, shivering as im gassed, start to shake, brb, be patient//


...Can i have some feedback please!

Peace ~ 1 ~

Inspectah:
can i have sum feedack plz!

~ 1 ~

Reef:
Nice shit

TiNmaN:
shit was dope and original, i liked it, props....

TheSheriff:
Very nice.

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