My Outlook On Life

[Reef]

beats bang like they made by Dr.Dre, the sun shines on a new day
the possesions around us create the words we say
but life is life an act, cause we're in a play
we try and try to get out of the situations we create
but we're stuck with being fake, for christs sake!
none of us are gangstas, just pawns as a chess board
and we're trying to impess the king and lords
ima break the trend, i aint gonna kill no one
when it comes down to it, im playin football, end to end
i chose what i do, and i will never be led into
a black hole, cause the choices are limited
and i want it all, unlimited
life is a game or so they tell me
that metaphor doesnt fit you see,
i believe that this fits more,

'life is a jigsaw, its all in bits
and the only way to fix it
is to see where the pieces fit'

its a strange outlook on life, im aware
to get my point across, i gotta dare to
talk and share strange points of view
i kno it seems weird, but what about points for you?

[da_notorious_mack]

dope shit mayne....flow was tight...nice content

[Inspectah]

Nice piece, not sure what message you tryin to get across, but it flowed well..

~ 1 ~

['Illicit']

yup thats that gareefa shit I'm used to...  nice dawg, keep spittin

[TheSheriff]

Dope piece, though it weakened in the middle-however, it did pick up again at the end.

[Entreri117]

dope shit mayne....flow was tight...nice content

[Reef]

Thanx 4 the feedback peeps

[Disceptive AssAssin]

nice flow.. stayed on topic too

[bez]

good shit

[Inspectah]

I liked it dawg, thats my homie, keep spitting ya usual dope verses! Nice content, and concept was good!

Peace