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3rd VIDEO Battle! (3-0) This time against some wannabe crip....

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Remedy360:
Getting a lot better, nice job.

Chamillitary Click:
That's dope, man. Good work. I think you really need to come more prepared though. I'm tell in you, go watch more serious battles and check the flow of their deliveries and punchlines.



I understand you're new to this and obviously not as good as the people in my video. But learning from great battlers would be good for anyone trying to take it seriously.

That delivery and energy is so important. And once you're comfortable enough to not come off as nervous and tense.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: Chamillitary Click on May 06, 2014, 12:51:00 AM ---That's dope, man. Good work. I think you really need to come more prepared though. I'm tell in you, go watch more serious battles and check the flow of their deliveries and punchlines.



I understand you're new to this and obviously not as good as the people in my video. But learning from great battlers would be good for anyone trying to take it seriously.

That delivery and energy is so important. And once you're comfortable enough to not come off as nervous and tense.

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Appreciate the feedback... and I checked out the video... but if I'm gonna learn from someone about battlin' I'm gonna learn from my era of emcee's I look up to, cats like KRS, Kurupt, Canibus, Eminem, Mos Def, or even the old Scribble Jam Battles or the Rap Olympics type of shit.

But this new generation with the KOTD is kind of not really my style.   I'm better off trying to develop my own style as you see I got my own style I just need more experience...

Chamillitary Click:
Na, fam. I'm not saying you have to copy that style. Or their wordplay. Just the flow and the delivery. I know it's hard to say "just sound more confident up there" because you are new to it and confidence will come with experience...but if you sounded more confident it would really sound tighter...even with the same bars you used this round.

Excited for the next battle. Guy on the left would give you trouble. You'd beat guy on the right.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: Chamillitary Click on May 06, 2014, 01:22:36 AM ---Na, fam. I'm not saying you have to copy that style. Or their wordplay. Just the flow and the delivery. I know it's hard to say "just sound more confident up there" because you are new to it and confidence will come with experience...but if you sounded more confident it would really sound tighter...even with the same bars you used this round.

Excited for the next battle. Guy on the left would give you trouble. You'd beat guy on the right.

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word... good lookin' out

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