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'Illicit':
well to be perfectly honest wit ya, the flows good, nice delivery but you sounded bored, shoulda put some enthusiasm in recordin, some voice, momentum etc.  the beat is decent imo, but other than that, if you get ya girls shit on there, redo your shit this oughta sound good as a result,  I aint tryin to put you or your work down homie, keep doin ya thing, and I aint claimin I could do it way better than you jus givin you my honest opinion.

White-Chocolate:
i'm feelin' the beat and all but im'a have to go with what Illicit said, you gotta try something with tha voice, my suggestion would be to try flowing the song out a few different ways and just see which flow has ur voice groovin'
peace
keep that shit tight mayne

:-:Mistah Menace:-::
Yo, thanks for the feedback, i'm very greatful, i've re-recorded it, i've dun what you'd sed wud make it more "up"...so now ya'll jus sit back and wait for the track ;D lol

thanks, peace, 1

Disceptive AssAssin:
 :P

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