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Reef:
look at the men on the frontline, re-tracing his bloodline
back through almost twelve years, we were here before
another Gulf War, and the man delved deep into his tears
then, he recognises his fears as the gunfire whizzes overhead
realisation that this aint a videogame, this is real life
and he could end up dead
so as he sits amoungst the press trying to maintain, not show the stress
he imagines his baby girl at home, shes a newborn
and shes never known who her Daddy is and what hes doing
the mother gets pictures and beings viewing the funeral in her own mind
but she cant speak, deosnt have anyone who she can confide
so she sits, crying at night..
cursing hussain & bush for starting this fight
and despite the re-assurance of the Ministery Of Defence
she cant help but watch the news in suspense, hoping her man will be there
out of the blue, a letter arives from Iraq..

'My Darling Wife'

it begins..

'I wish god would take me away form this place, repent my sins
watching my comrads die, seeing pure fear in the eyes
thats no life for a family man like I'

The woman begins to cry, and cant read on
because of the newsfalsh, her husband, he's gone

gyrl1da:
now i c why they call u hip hop poet.... very tight post!

:-:Mistah Menace:-::

--- Quote from: HipHopPoet on March 31, 2003, 11:41:54 AM ---look at the men on the frontline, re-tracing his bloodline
back through almost twelve years, we were here before
another Gulf War, and the man delved deep into his tears
then, he recognises his fears as the gunfire whizzes overhead
realisation that this aint a videogame, this is real life
and he could end up dead
so as he sits amoungst the press trying to maintain, not show the stress
he imagines his baby girl at home, shes a newborn
and shes never known who her Daddy is and what hes doing
the mother gets pictures and beings viewing the funeral in her own mind
but she cant speak, deosnt have anyone who she can confide
so she sits, crying at night..
cursing hussain & bush for starting this fight
and despite the re-assurance of the Ministery Of Defence
she cant help but watch the news in suspense, hoping her man will be there
out of the blue, a letter arives from Iraq..

'My Darling Wife'

it begins..

'I wish god would take me away form this place, repent my sins
watching my comrads die, seeing pure fear in the eyes
thats no life for a family man like I'

The woman begins to cry, and cant read on
because of the newsfalsh, her husband, he's gone

--- End quote ---

Werd, This Guy Is A Poet, Fo' Real, Keep This Up...
Topic, Vocab, Flow Was Off The Hook...


P.S Gyrl1da - You Got Any Audio I Can Peep Plz...?

'Illicit':

--- Quote ---The woman begins to cry, and cant read on
because of the newsfalsh, her husband, he's gone
--- End quote ---

word, nice pieceh omie, very deep, I liked it, deserves a vote for best key.


keep blessin us dawg

Reef:
Bump.. can i get some more feedback pleasE?

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