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December 25, 2014, 02:47:48 AM »
im locked inside a prison but im prisoner to myself
the bars of the past which I cant break apart are the cause of my poor health
im sick inside from tryin to hide from them deamons lurkin near
im tired of the anger, annoyed at the danger of livin life in fear.
im chained to the evils of my generations gold
looking from the inside out with only dreams to hold
now all fear is gone, all hopes been torn, into shreds of depression, leavin only the impression of this forgotten prison that's me.
im yearnin for the tone of the voice in the stone
it speaks of memories all sprinkled with dust
a time before envy a heartbeat before lust
but somethings missin from the dream
I remember the scream
nobody came and I recall the feeling from an incident I know happened before
im scared to think of the touch
I know I was hurt to much
im getting flashbacks feelin the backlash of something
I know too much
sinister wishes wash my dishes
dirtied by the greed that grew from satans seed
he gives you your desires and feeds your hate
by winning you over with wealth and want as bait
if your weak your caught
your souls been bought
your one and only
you know you'll be lonely
but still you hold onto that homely feelin of foolishness.
(Yeah alright, this might seem a bit wack on a westcoast forum cos you know im not about to get all wigga and shit on ya and start spoutin wanna be gangsta lyrics but still, in the forum description it says art and lyrics..... I wrote this when I was 16 and its one of the only rhymes I can remember so im gon test the waters with it.... not really looking for replies, but if ya wanna give some feedback, negative, whatever, I'll take a peek next time im here.... peace!)
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December 25, 2014, 05:32:20 AM »
not bad... keep blessin the board homie... and no need for the disclaimer at the bottom, feel free
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December 28, 2014, 11:57:11 AM »
good stuff, keep it up
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