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SkillZ -VS- Mickey aka Mickaveli

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vitodeluca:
vote: skillz- better flow, metaphors, more personals and harder punches.  Makaveli didn't seem to throw anything personals, the rhyme sounded more like a keystyle.  Flow was nice though.  Gotta give it to skillz though, just a little more complexity in his rhyme and good methaphors

Lost Titan:
skills overall was better harder hit and more mutis

vote skills

NoT:
Now, when I was here before a lot of people accused me of being hyper-critical of other people's shit so take this as you will and please, please don't let yourself get offended by something that someone on the internet says because a) it would mean you have mad emotional issues and b) it's nothing personal. I just need to say this because sometimes people take criticism the wrong way. ;)

skillZ - Honestly, after reading some of your other shit this wasn't up-to-par for you. Don't get me wrong, it was still by no means a bad verse, but you can do better. I don't really have any suggestions because it seems like you understand the basic principles of keystyling (a verse that's easy to flow with, easy to read, and packed with good punches/wordplay and well-used multies). Not bad, but not good either.

Mickaveli - URGH! I hate when verses are one paragraph stringed together, but rest assured that I'm not going to let it affect the way I vote. I like a lot of the multies and it was easy to flow with the whole way through, but the punches were evasive and while some of them were kind of "artsy" (like the blue whale one) I wasn't really feeling them all that much to be honest.

Conclusion - I thought this battle was relatively even but I thought SkillZ had better punches overall. So my vote goes to him.

Alright, now that I've set myself up for mad hate could either of you please vote on my battle here? Thanks.

·SiNiStEr·:
dope vote.. NoT

vitodeluca:
yeah Not, no one really even gives that kind of feedback on battles, so I'm sure that both of these dudes appreciate it.  Shit, I know I would if people gave me more than "good flow, or not enough personals"  Props man.

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