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T.J.:
ok, rules
15 bars max
first to 4 votes
3 votes straight=ko
open votes?? not sure if u care who votes..

T.J.:



im comin straight raw like unlubricated unprotected anal sex/
this lil bitch rides more dicks than Tony Hawk skatin on decks/
im leavin Swollen Members with swollen jaws, the choice is yours/1
come face the fact im flawless, your straight shittin ya drawers/
im here to settle the score, to diminish hip-hop-poetic justice/1
dont make me bust this, whats this, suck this barrel of my gun you punk bitch/
u couldnt form a solid punch if u called up Mike Tyson to box with me/
ur as useful as road debris, it sucks to see, this bitch fucks cocks with glee/
u couldnt be bruce lee if u were his stunt double, this cunt wants trouble/1
u couldnt see me comin if u analysed ground photos taken by the Hubble/
finding it hard to sleep? awake in fear, coz im the Monster In The Closet/1
i'll pimp this bitch like Too Short, im expecting in the first customer's deposit/

all the lines with 1 next to them are all related to his avatar/name.
doh ma!!!
its 3:25am!!! i cant believe i stayed up to write this!!!
oh well.... just waitin on your verse

Reef:
the 'Monsnter In The Closet' is about to make the answer 'Swollen'/
I've always been Gareefa, where was you been a gay dancer, and the moves stolen/ (1)
Even jacko couldnt help you with your moves/ (1)
Your more of a woman than Jenifer Lopez, all you need is the boobs!/
So, you beat Indy twice and general dick thrice/
But ya didnt know im a well known asshole.. like obie trice/
Maan i got some advice, dont fuck with the big doggs in the yard/
I aint the undertaker but this is the price for thiknin your hard/
First, i snap ya neck in two, your gonna be so scarred, even you wont recognise you/
My lyrics and poetry will destroy you, its like flowetry - this concept is gunna annoy you/
The 11th bar now and that pimp in your fuckin sig wont get you far now/
3.25am? man you must be fuckin crazy, i wouldnt be stayin up that late, even if you payed me/
You scared of the ghosts and gouls yet?/
Fuck you man.. i aint battlin no more... I got my respect/

·SiNiStEr·:
What up guys..

I guess ill just get to the voting..

Both verses were for the most part simplistic but both had a style of their own.

<theanswer> - not a whole lot of unity but you had some decent punches. The flow was sorta off/on. Overall decent.

hiphoppoet - a good flow, but more poetic than anything, not much of a battle verse but a good flow overall.

<theanswer> - 3.75 / 5
hipHOPpoet - 3.65 / 5

vote - <theanswer>

gareefa you can do better than that bro!! keep spittin' though, ill bet you can get back in ya groove soon enough.

Reef:
Thanx man

Can u vote on my battle wit Mickaveli as well plz?

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