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2nd Nature... death
M Dogg™:
--- Quote from: 2nd Nature on April 20, 2003, 12:29:11 PM ---Everyone realy knows my diss was 5 times better then this...And you too fake to drop a real rhyme.
--- End quote ---
Alright, lets see yours
M-Dogg...blah...
Never thought Id find a Dogg, more pussy than Halle Berry...
(decent line, pussy lines though are not that hard, and no real play with it)
Sayin he retired and shit, more like "AHHH HE SCARED ME
(WTF, you ain't knowing shit about me, why I retired, or why I'm back, leave it at that)
This bitch is a dickrider...it makes sence that i beat you
(when you beat me?)
Im a tailor with bullets, I'll make your shirt see through
(Ok line, witty)
I'll introduced to M a 'shocking death' like 'floods in power plants'
(Ok line, nothing great)
You winning is 'Rupaul's pregnancy' u pray but still 'no chance'
(Ok, Rupaul line, even I stay away from them 'cause they are too common)
Test ya luck ya teeth get 'bucked' scientz leaves no change
(WTF, makes no sence)
Count ya 'winds'(wins), i got enough to leave California wit 'hurricanes'
(Ok line again, not a punch, but a boost, I like that)
SWITCHIN STYLEZ...
If you was ever ill, the situation had-to-be-medical
(lol... nice)
the only time you touched pussy, was while in ya daddy's-genitals
(played)
if you were walkin my streetz, you'd get stalked-and-stabbed-quick
(really... really played, like 1987 played)
i can tell you been lickin a manz ass, cuz you talkin-mad-shit
(that's cool right there though, like my shit to ToNe in the title match, punch of the month too I might add, yours was alright too)
everytime the fags r here this bitch shows his anus
(Just over done, come now dogg)
like kiddie games seen as hard, isn't M overrated??
(follow a over done line with a weak line)
choke n slit ya stomach leaven it open an scraped
(Ok, gangsta rap is back, played)
got u shittin pins when i tap ya soul wit grenades!
(Ok, pretty decent, coming back to skillz)
Doggs a badass? he'll be dropped in shook next
(Ok, your talking, not rapping)
cuz i got u spittin' in circles, like comic book text!
(lol, I like that, witty, nice way to end)
Average diss, not special. No rhyme structure, not something I care about either, but it's so important to others that it should be thought of. No Muitis. Maybe to you it was great, but if I copy and paste an old rhyme, it would kill this shit. Even the one I spit had rhyme structure, and shit. Nice try. Please try again later.
|JEM|ILL|:
Fake killaz try so they try to start flowing, got DayGo with you well your nutt holding/
No flow..weak...dont make sence neither
Think you got control but who's really controlling, where's Rippa at? with me rolling/
Im not with rippa...so this line has no revelavence nor flow...
Against a vet you should never speak, I cameback to leave dead bodies in shits creek/
...sits creek?...didn't make sence
Head down as the boat you pattle sinks, you with the worms and the rest of the weak/
Flow just left, worms and the rest of the weak?
Like winter, your skillz shit ain't got no heat, like How High you got "2 Inches" under the sheats/
...um...similie...but weak...
Grip the shit and cover with two fingers, beat it, then cry 'cause it don't linger/
I get it...no flow and weak...
(hold up dogg, fuck a warm up, just kill this little pussy)
There isn't a Rim you can get Above if you was Birdie, Like 2Pac Pain I give well you steal like Master P, heard me/
...oy...that was weaker then hell...
I'm a king like Royce that's going for win 30, like Nelly you sing your noice hoing to be my kin who worthy/
No flow...filler...
Dogg fuck off, Elite I am and Elite you'll never be, I never take a lose, a i beat bitched like you everyday see/
Who said I wanted to be Elite?..lst part dont make sence
Ya' I retired, but I'm needed by the W-C-C, 'caused I'm still admired and you can't handle it like a big dick in virgin pussy/
last part was aight...
Overall: No flow...No Wordplay...No Ill Punches...Nonsence Jumbled with cussin...Weak...
Atleast mine made sence, was done within 10 mins, had wordplay, flow, multies...thus showing it was better then your's...Also I know this wan't my best..Everyone knows that...It was the first rhyme I had written in almost a month...So get overyour self...If I copied and pasted my old shit...I'd rip my own verse too...so what?...go on now and diss me again with somethin that makes sence...maybe i'll answer it...other wise...PRACTICE,PRACTICE,PRACTCE
TheSheriff:
Daygo, how blind are you? I have no reason to dickride M Dogg, none whatsoever. Just because you can't appeciate my point of view, doesn't make me a dickrider. Get the fuck off my nuts, you're just mad I voted against you-you wouldn't care otherwise.
And Jemuel, nigga please, I don't know you, so I don't like or dislike you-and I don't appreciate your lyrical talents anymore because you fell off within the space of five keystyles or so.
M Dogg™:
dogg, it's my first verse since retirement, it's also done in little time, and since your shit was weak, I ain't putting my best unless it gets me a win in a battle. ::) I hate weak muthaphukkaz trying to make a name from them selves. And you did roll with Rippa, his little two man crew. him but fucking you.
.:DayGoStyLz:.:
--- Quote from: Owen on April 20, 2003, 01:01:44 PM ---Daygo, how blind are you? I have no reason to dickride M Dogg, none whatsoever. Just because you can't appeciate my point of view, doesn't make me a dickrider. Get the fuck off my nuts, you're just mad I voted against you-you wouldn't care otherwise.
And Jemuel, nigga please, I don't know you, so I don't like or dislike you-and I don't appreciate your lyrical talents anymore because you fell off within the space of five keystyles or so.
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ive keystyled enough to know a D/R when i see one. i aint "mad" about u voting against me. If there was ANY legitimate reason, based on ANY aspects of keystyle...to say i lost that battle tho, then id accept someone voting against me. When i battled Pr1mo, i accepted that either me..or him could win that, givin the verses that were spit. but when the whole world votes one way, and basically doesnt even feel its close....then, you come along. I think its more then just, "point of view". but oh well, fukit. That shit does make WCC look bad tho. No matter who itz against...
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