Author Topic: G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...  (Read 123 times)

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G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...
« on: April 24, 2003, 03:25:42 AM »

You were once 'un-weathered', innocent and given 'overshowered-trust'/
Then i was stripped bare, like a bird 'un-feathered' with an excuse of 'overpowered-lust'/
My feelings 'tossed-aside' i saw the future, and i thought i had 'lost-my-bride'/
You had been captured by the 'enemy' and you just 'surrenders?'/
I thought i was the one you loved?, although its 'never-me' there was always 'contenders'/

I'd rather 'walk-away' than throw myself back into the 'trouble'/
I dont wanna 'talk-today' coz what i say hits me back in the face, 'doubled'/
As the 'saying-goes': "keep your 'friends' close, but your 'enemies' 'closer'/
Sticking with your 'betraying-foes' who 'pretend' to like you, but 'never-me'/
...saying to myself, the had a choice between me, and us both, they 'chose-her'/

Females lead on, when you were 'mis-leaded'/
You go back to him, when you he 'mis-treated?'/
There has always been 'chemistry' in science/
And there is always love between ex-'boyfriends'/
So i just said to myself: "let-em-be"/
An ol book re-opened, this new chapter is where the 'story-ends'/


.... this is how i think the future will end up, i'll continue this soon in the same thread.. can i have some feedback please?
« Last Edit: April 24, 2003, 03:35:18 AM by Genesis »
 

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Re:G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...
« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2003, 08:54:13 AM »
Nice shit man.. Got your thoughts and feeling across well there
 

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Re:G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...
« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2003, 02:05:28 AM »
Thanx homie for the feedback, its much appreciated.. Now i wonder if there are any other people who can be bothered to post some feedback, coz hiphoppoet seems to be the only guy replying to my keystyles.. .are you all asleep?

IF so wake the FUCK UP and smell what us bothered emcees are cooking! Damn!

 

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Re:G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...
« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2003, 05:26:07 AM »
i dont think u need us to tell you that your shit is deep, thoughtful, yadda yadda.... u probly already know it urself... and i think its coz u post so many keystyles up, everyones finding it hard to keep up.

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Re:G:\\ I'm blind, but can see the future...
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2003, 07:57:29 AM »
Thanx, lol maybe it is coz i post so many up.. but its not like i post up 10 a week, maybe 2-3 a week, and there not all that long.. so i dont know.. but thanx for the comment and advice.. :)