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·SiNiStEr· -Vs- .:TimeLock:.<<Winner

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.:TimeLock:.:
10-15 bars
3-0=KO
first to 4

·SiNiStEr·:
Once Upon A Time...

~One krazy ol' 'niccah' was caught performin Cloud 9 rain(reign) 'dances' by the name of 'Timelock'//
~Elite boi 'sinistah' came to tha scene with some 'ambulances' and an amish-gay-pornstar screamin' eat 'thine-cock'//
~Then a 'fine-flock' of geese flew over and asked TL, what you gon' do when you regain a-stance-on-ya-feet?//
~Timelock thought to himself, its about that time to confess muh allegiance-to-elite//
     
     Aight no more story-tellin.. Let's get this shit crackin'

~Thinkin ya hard behind ya Cloud 9 banner, its obvious you tryin to lay-low, the only thing that makes you hard is fuckin J.Lo!//
~Fool I been spittin' since you wuz a glimma in ya mum's eye, Im just fuckin with a dumb guy, when asked to battle Elite he said uhhh, why?//
~Sinister bringin tha heat, like a sting in ya feet, takin ya legs out from underneath//
~You dont fit-the-label of an internet gangsta slayer, youz just a fucking-hater//[1]
~Timelock couldnt bring good shit-to-the-table if he was a Burger King-waiter//[2]
~After my first two bars I already caught yo ass shittin'.. abandon keystyle for months? I can smell tha pre-written//
~There was a lock-in-time when Cloud 9 possessed a Mack-n'-9, wankstaz provin they got nuthin but wack-rhymes and excess-time//
~You ugly like a Cloud 9 69 but it takes 2 to -tango-, you aint fillin the 'partnership', ask -daygo-, you know he cant 'part-with-the-dick'//[3]
~I like the attempt to attack-me, i got agility, ya didnt land a hit-on-me, any other Cloud 9 emcees want some? Get-at-me..//

[1] - 'internet gangsta slaya' takin from K.I.N.G.S., tl's old kru.
[2] - Burger King food is exactly what i said, good.. shit.
[3] - 69, as in the sexual position, you can guess the rest.

Droppin before the guy who challenges me yet again.. *sigh*

.:TimeLock:.:
Call me da Prime Minista ah Battle, cuz I'm here to administer •SiNiStEr• through "Time Travel", all the way back to his crib and baby rattle/
How dare u pick up the mic and try to battle, me, a pro, I'll super-glue ya fingers to ya keyboard, and tell ya: "Stick to what ya know!"/
from ya comments on the board I can see ya knowledge ah hip hop is poor, and lacking, really and truly I can't even picture u gift rapping/
sinister u ain't running shit but ya mouth, on the net 24/7 cuz ya parents got u on lock down in yah house, the only exercise u know is double clicking on ya mouse/
it's time for me to put and end to this lame, open yo closet fully, put yo ass on full blast cuz u's a fucking flame, u wanted it, so now I'm lyrically putting ya ass to shame/
every bar I spit, burning u like a cigarette, every bar u spit, be illegitimate, ya lyrics just they just don't connect/
my spit's hot out da oven, ur scripts melt when mine be doublin', Time stops when your lyrics I'm devouring /
eternally I-stay-alive, u still learning see, that's why u-bout-to-die, as death falls on u u-wonder-why, simply put u-got-to-die/
I carry out lyrically-murder as sinister and death, I-make-merger, no need for me to-go-any-further/
this kid died young and dumb, he step to time lock and I lyrically clasped he lungs, that's the kinda shit I do just for fun/

T.J.:
ok.... i have read over them......

timelock- your verse was sorta structured in a poetic way. the multi's were on/off. the punches were there, but they could have come stronger. flow wasnt too bad. overall i guess i expected more from u.
sinister- hit harder than timelock. flow was sorta inconsistent. some of the multis were good, but some were kinda weird. overall not bad.

sorta hard to vote for IMO, but my vote goes to sinister. dont hate y'all.

Still_Blazin:
VOTE=SINISTER

his first 4 bars was ill...

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