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Indecisive (VS) Skillz

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Inspectah:
Damn. and you complain about my late entry, you could get an oscar for this entrance..  ::)

Inspectah:
* Post the verse up SKILLS.. or what you hiding somewhere? *

SkillZ:
This kid 'never throwing punches' like mental patient in 'straight-jackets'/-
An i'm "blowing your mind", lace'n your brain with 'explosive-plastic'/-
Your only "beating himself", like 'pre-mature-e-jack-u-lation'/-
I'm 'crackin your fuckin skull' and "breakin-your-concentration"/-
You give a new meaning to "down syndrome" with how often you 'found-on-your-knees'/-
He loves 'playing with balls', being a "gym teacher" has been his life's-dream/-
The only time you come 'hard lines' is after 'over-dosing' on a bottle of 'viagra'/-
He 'Sticks out" cause hes labeled whackest to hit the site, skillz just taged-ya/-
This bitch 'use-less' like doctors inventing 'male pregnacy-test'/-
Your brain always "drawling blanks" cause your "lifes-a-rough-sketch"/-
Hes truly "one of a kind" like tooth-less, fisting hookers that cross-dress/-
This fags "addicted to cock" hands always 'on wood' "chain'n your self to trees to pro-test"/- (tree-hugger)
You Battle'n ah vets, known for fatal punches but now your deal'n with a master-at-arms/-
Like "John lennon" trying to rap, your settin off the 'gay-emcee's-alarms'/-
I'll Cut your 'hands' off and 'shove em up your ass', cause your the only one "feeling-your-shit"
An i'll make you "swallow your pride", choking on your 'dick' ... suicide easy-ta-commit/-
Give You ah "mental block" droping a hundred bricks over-your-skull/-
Hes stealing from everyone, 'biting over an over' now the sites-feeling-"mauled"/-
Like 'shy fags' you find him 'under cover's' roll playing cops n 'interrogating with night-sticks'/-
You claim to be "straight" but watch gay-flicks, hitting drag-queens he likes "straight"-dicks!/-

vitodeluca:
Skillz-  Pretty hard hitting with really good metaphors.  Your verse seemed to lack multis though, and for me didn't really flow as well as it could have.  I noticed you use a pretty strict "couplet" type rhyme scheme, for lack of a better word, meanin' that every two lines seem to rhyme together, but not with the next one, i.e. jackets/plastic, ejaculation/concentration, knees/dream, viagra/tagged ya.  For me its cool to see it flow together a little more than that, maybe just my opinion.  Still, your rhymes are tight

Indecisive-  Your rhyme hit hard too, had a few less personals but seemed to flow together better than Skillz.  You also got some nice multis in there.  Overall in my opinion you shit hit a bit harder and flowed better so I'm givin' ya this one

Vote= Indecisive

T.J.:
vote=indy.
skills, ur multis that u write as multis arent really multis coz only the last syllable of each multi rhymes. u hit fairly hard tho.
indy hit harder, liked his flow more.

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