Author Topic: Indepth Feedback - Indecisive  (Read 324 times)

Inspectah

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Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« on: May 31, 2003, 03:13:36 AM »
Do you ignore the truth? will you not allow it to be real?/
Is it coz your a youth? that you will be to numb to feel?/
Only 'the one' can see how things affect your destiny/
Only 'the one' can help you choose what happens in reality/
'The one' is someone who can see the future of yourself/
Not the upcoming past, but your actions and responses to everything else/
'The one' will use your perception of self against you to make you see/
That you can change your future, by guidence in the right path, of your destiny/
'The one' can read peoples minds, but is not telepathic/
'The one' potrays himself as normal, young, youthful and charismatic/
'The one' is gifted with an anomylee to life, his mind is elastic/
When people experience emotional conflict within their body and mind/
'The one' reads the signals out of the body, to tap into their line/
Once in, a way of exit is founded, to take you out of your pain/
He will help by listening, comforting, understanding, over-riding your brain/
Because he also feels what you feel, and makes you see other ways/
To overcome torn emotions and shows you he's the one who can take pain away/
Like a sponge, 'the one' can soak up all your negative feelings/
Then hack into their mainframe, finding the corupt code, and giving them meaning/
Once he understands why you were feeling this way/
He changes your perception of what you should do, and lets you live another day/
See 'the one' is no super-human, but a gifted person, a 'saviour'/
He cannot perform witnessing miracles, but he can in the mind, changing behaviour/
Never has someone stumbeled across such a person like 'the one'/
But everyone must realise that when your trapped in your mind, theres always someone.../

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2003, 03:20:33 AM »
'The one' is someone who can see the future of yourself/
Not the upcoming past, but your actions and responses to everything else/

'The one' can read peoples minds, but is not telepathic/
'The one' potrays himself as normal, young, youthful and charismatic/
'The one' is gifted with an anomylee to life, his mind is elastic/

Once in, a way of exit is founded, to take you out of your pain/
He will help by listening, comforting, understanding, over-riding your brain/

Never has someone stumbeled across such a person like 'the one'/
But everyone must realise that when your trapped in your mind, theres always someone.../

Dem Lines Where Dope As Fuck!! This Has To Be One Ov The Best Drop I've Seen From You, No Doubt, I Keep Buggin' You To Record Your Shit, Get Down To It!, HaHa..
The Vocab And Flow Was Tyte, I Dunno How "You" Wud Flow It, But I'd Flow It Like Talk/Rap, Knah Mean?

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2003, 03:21:01 AM »
Thats a nice piece man.. Not as good as some of your others... But i do like it..

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anomylee

Maybe im just being extremely stupid, or youve mispelt this word.. but what does it mean?
 

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2003, 10:32:31 AM »
Anomylee, means a glitch or rareity that does not usually occur and is not always found.

Thanx for the feedback.. anymore?
 

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2003, 02:24:54 PM »
Anomylee, means a glitch or rareity that does not usually occur and is not always found.

Thanx for the feedback.. anymore?

Ohh yeah.. lol u spelt it wrong... i aint dissin u for that coz i cant spell
 

Inspectah

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2003, 03:19:38 PM »
lol.. dont worry about it bro.. thanx for the feedback anyways..

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #6 on: June 01, 2003, 06:41:01 AM »
yer man that was stricly dope.  Took my re-loaded to the next level.  Really dope, the lines we all structed well and it flowed well too.  Neo wud be proud.  
 

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Re:Indepth Feedback - Indecisive
« Reply #7 on: June 01, 2003, 02:50:28 PM »
*bump* anymore feedback...