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Born In The Shadows, Raised On The Street (Fuck Elite) by Bez

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Reef:
BTW Bez: Liked the rhyme.. came off pretty good.. The flow was tight

bez:

--- Quote from: Gareefa on May 11, 2003, 01:21:09 PM ---BTW Bez: Liked the rhyme.. came off pretty good.. The flow was tight

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cheers lad, nothing personel against elite like, I like em all as individuals but as I have said in the past I had groups like.

Inspectah:

--- Quote from: Gareefa on May 11, 2003, 01:20:44 PM ---
--- Quote from: Ind3ci$iv3 on May 11, 2003, 03:47:33 AM ---Muthafucka aint gone even give us *palm~stress* (typing) and you *know~it*/
I aint even *concentrating* while im *retaliating* to this *harmless~poet*/
Let'em *have~it* thinkin he *diss~n~dat* murda you, thats *oneless~faggit*/
Bez ya *dissins~whack* keep ass licking and *being~mack*/
Stunned, *phaised~by~elite* blind to notice you n tramps related, both *raised~by~tha~streets*/
You a *lone~shark* coz you think you gone *skin~us~cats*/
As you stand *alone~in~tha~dark* i light up the scene with *un~limitless~gats*/
I'll put some shit in a bowl, you apply the spoon and *shit~stur*/
Bring ya worst, whats the only thing left, one of us cats in a hurse/
Ya punch like a pussy, ya know why, coz ya *hits~pur*/

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Putting * and ~ every other word doesnt make your rhyme seem better, or cooler or tighter...

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And that was my intention to do that? make it look cooler, tighter, better....????

TheSheriff:
Now that the four contenders in this beef - D.A., Cloud 9, Elite and Bez - have all spat out their pacifiers, can we get some quiet.

Thankyou.

bez:

--- Quote from: Jeff Davis on May 11, 2003, 03:39:19 PM ---Now that the four contenders in this beef - D.A., Cloud 9, Elite and Bez - have all spat out their pacifiers, can we get some quiet.

Thankyou.

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