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vitodeluca vs. Da~animal~cracka (verses up)

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vitodeluca:
Thanks man, I saw your record and your other shit and knew I'd better bring heat or not even attempt it.  Still got mad props for you, I've seen a lot of your other shit (obviously) and it's reeeaaal tight, I can tell your heart wasn't really in this one....can everybody still give me some inputs on this?  I put a lot of effort into it and it'd be cool to have the criticism.

Primo:
yea no prob. Keystyle aint me no more

NewJack:
vito ur verse was hot as hell

.:DayGoStyLz:.:
damn, Vito retired Pr1mo...lol

good shit vito, Pr1mo didnt spit his usual at all to be honest. I feel him on that, "not bein into it" tho. When u not into it, u dont write yur best. But yah, good verse vito. Pretty good metas n all. Jus work on yur multis homie. They arent easy, and alot cant get it down. Yur doin aiight tho. Jus make sure ALL words rhyme, or its not a multi...and no need for a ~ in between the words....

ex) Killin~quick, and greatest~clique arent multis....
     Killin~quick, and villian~clique...is a multi....

all words have to rhyme, and if possible...every syllable in those words as well. Itz not easy, jus keep workin...u spittin tight so far tho man.

peacccccccccce!

BTW, liked that first line lol

vitodeluca:
Hey Dayglo, thanks a lot for the inputs man, believe me it's real appreciated.  I'm workin' on the whole multis thing, this was the first verse I really focused on it.  I'm feelin' ya on the whole "pr1mo didn't spit his best thing", I read his old stuff gettin' ready to write his verse.  And yeah, I thought I'd twist that 50 cent line a little for some comedy...

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