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~Gate-crashers~ (keystyle)

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T.J.:
just a lil keystyle i wrote about gatecrashers....



its party time, im a wild card invite drinkin bacardi lime/
the gatecrashers rockin up now, and it's hardly nine/
first i'm thinkin ignore them fools and let the party go on/
then this girl gets dumped in the pool, the crowd was ho-hum/
the gatecrashers start shouting, smashin everything they found/
then that horrid sound, a gun gets fired and a body hits the ground/
metal butterflies from beretta coccoons flew at building walls/
another bullet connected to an adolescent, the lil thing falls/
the kid's brother ran screaming, addressed the problem, actin frantic/
the party holder getting manic, trying to surpress the fighting in panic/
the guy coppin head in the bathroom zipped his pants up with speed/
steps out the door with his girl, BANG! the crashers screamin "BLEED"/
the groupies of the crowd turn a blind eye and start runnin/
those armed with glocks let out a sigh and start gunnin/

the aftermath

5 innocent people dead, the culprits left untouched and unfound/
surely the neighbours were in on this, claims they never heard a gun sound/
no investigation was ran, families and friends left scarred/
as for the ones who fought back? theyre servin a few months behind bars/

Reef:
not bad man.. it was a little different from what we usually see on here.. I liked it.

Kill:
nice piece...you really got potential

'Illicit':
yeh really man, nice work. keep writin

·SiNiStEr·:
tru story?

o man thats fuckt up.. i wouldnt let it get that far.

anyway.. nice piece even tho it put me in a bad mood

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