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da_notorious_mack:
15 bars
no dick votes/m dogg votes ;D
who spitting first?

·SiNiStEr·:
15 bars max or even?

you spit first.. ya write quick

da_notorious_mack:
imma murder this man....


You bout to fell this vets-wrath,when my techs-blast..
if you blow up,well meet-again on celebrity death-match..
did ya get-that?better respect-Mack,like Aretha-Franklin..
before i destroy elite-plans-an..
decimate their best-spitter,you the only hot one,the rest-bitter..[1]
tryin ta come at me but this vet-quicker..
dude ya time-due,you know i can out rhyme-you..
Kal,Tech,Maestro,you can probably be cloud nine-too!..
go on jump ship an destroy elite for-me..
Sin could be in "porn",he still wudnt be a "thug" Or "G"..{orgy}
these kids aint got luv-fa-me,so i have to mention-war..
so shots plug Sin from a distance like extension-cords..
you carried weapons-at-first,now you shook-an-frightened..
stay reppin-the-burbs,stay out the hood like they took-ya-license..
So you Mr Sinister? dont be suprised if i leave you "X"ed-out...[2]
i aint even lookin at you...im lookin at the next-bout..


[1]Sinister been called elites future by m dogg.....the rest jus sorta bitter bout tone breakin up their kru

[2]Mr Sinister was a villian in the X-Men


Get at it soon...i wanna see your verse should be hot....

·SiNiStEr·:
fa sho homie..

Aight lez go

~Bashin mack-cliques with muh sinister tactics, DA full of wack-tricks like ya dallas mavericks//
~I got newbies depressin-me, vets surpressin-me, bitches on my nuts incessantly//
~When I spit these walls-are-shakin, balls-are-breakin, even bathroom stalls-are-shakin//
~Ya couldnt "drop personals" if ya mishandled a phone-book, Sinister the elite Lone-Wolf, walked in the door and even tone-moved//
~Ill help ya "drop tight shit" and partially sew-up-ya-rectum, im a radioactive kamikaze after i blow-up-n-infect-'em//
~Dropped once and ya got an ejection, newbs toss up shit and i reject-'em, a lyrikal reflection//
~Its a feat to beat me, you cant compete with Elite completely, ya gots to cheat to make meat of me, not likin me? join the commitee//
~Lyrikally hazin and blazin people, mutha fucka im amazin people, eat cats fah lunch like im grazin people//
~You desperate for backup like givin meth-to-a-female, e~gangsta thought he was hard till he suffered a death-by-an-email//
~Ya in violation of the compilation of Elite, ya fallin-game might be the reason why you now reppin tha hall-of-shame//
~Like an aorta marathon im racin'-hearts, a bad wind fixin to blow mack out like hastened-farts//
~Ya patience-starts to weaken, my rhymes so frantic, feelin tantric, Mack "fell off" when he bit like a man-tick//
~"Props" to ya for bein one of the only cats in herre with wins in double-digits, but ya cant 'raise up' to me like youz a troubled-midget//

Haha.. I'm done

Good battle Mack.. lez get some votes up in herre!

vitodeluca:
Mack: Flow was real tight (I always say tell ya that, lol) and I like you don't use overly long bars in your battle freestyles.  I dug your metas too, the extension cord one was pretty comedy.  You didn't really use any personals though, save talkin' about him being in Elite, which didn't really hit that hard.  Your other punches were pretty good though.

Sin:  You had some real nice multis and good metas too.  I liked the sew up ya rectum line, funny shiznit.  Some of your lines didn't really make sense at the expense of rhyming, i.e. "feeling tantric" (?) and "givin' meth to a female", or maybe I'm just not getting it.  Still, your flow was tight and I felt like you incorporated a few more personals, i.e. Hall of shame, dallas mavericks, e-gangsta/death by email, bit like a man-tick, ect. although the biting thing on mack is something you yourself have said is played out. Overall, good verse, gotta give it to ya.

Vote=Sinister

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