The1NOnlyEvidence vs. jaydubuwa

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

15 bars max
first to 4 votes
3-0 votes=ko

[White-Chocolate]

i know yall new but u should both say u've checked in an pick who goes first an i deadline if yall want one
peaze

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

ayo listen up to this closely son im the motherfucka who owns this section/
tha don of em all they rise and they fall but i be the one who beats u to a crawl/
lookin for love in alll the wrong places/homie u dont know me but i will love to beat yo face in/
like a dog in a cage ill make u feel my rage ill rip ur fuckin heart out then its war i will wage/
my life is fucked up beyond any help/so just pack up yo rhymes and put dem back on da shelf/

to bring it all to a point/like jesus they will annoint/
me as the king of this battle while u just a baby wit a rattle/
this is straight up psychology ill make u see the light like the doctors of optomotry/
when u workin late at night i be at ur house fuckin the shit out yo wife/
im so fuckin hard that when u disregard i stab u in the neck with a fuckin glass shard/

its like u the victim and i the assailant i see u walkin up i knock yo ass off the railin/
and send yo ass sailin then i put one in ur brain n'/
u cant do ur show u got a tag on ur toe/
chillin like a villain im ready able and willin/
to smack u up and beat u to a pulp cuz i bring it to ur ass the the US in the gulf/

[White-Chocolate]

good shit yo

where's jaydubuwa, u up next dawg

[jaydubuwa]

Listen, u call urself the one n only wit ur over tha rim pride but u ain’t shit homie/
U ain’t nuthin: probably a bita, just a fake ass phonie/
Dum wanksta sittin there smokin ur cheap ass stogiez/
Spittin mad disses but u don’t fuckin know me/
U anotha dummy like lost talkin about animalz in cage tryin to describe ur rage/(1)
Got my anger risin faster, almost ready ta bust out a 12 gauge/
Naw just playin I fight fist ta fist not like a puss wit a glass shard/(2)
Yo i’m unpredictable catchin everyone off guard/
Ur shit has no rhyme gottin ya lookin like a retard/
Afta I’m done with u everyone will be sendin ya a get well soon card/
Rhymin how ya think u own this section, tryin ta act like yo shitz perfection/(3)
Ur only a lil geezy like me ya gotta earn respect/
Just like some of tha newbiez we’re insignificant just like an insect/
Tryin ta be portayed as a big shot, too much pride eatin u alive/
last line stingin ya shit like tha pain of a bee hive/

(1)Aww shit they done let lost out of his cage/
(Re:Lost Titan -vs- Jaydubwa
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2003, 12:58:11 PM ») also 1nonly acting like a dog in a cage

(2)1nonlyz line about comin at me with a glass shard

(3)beginning when he sayz he ownz this section

[White-Chocolate]

i'ma have to go with The1NOnly on this...
explanation: his shit was hard hitting from beginning to end, some real cut throat shit, i like the raw aggression there, these lines were hella tight

tha don of em all they rise and they fall but i be the one who beats u to a crawl/

lookin for love in alll the wrong places/
homie u dont know me but i will love to beat yo face in/
like a dog in a cage ill make u feel my rage ill rip ur fuckin heart out then its war i will wage/

u cant do ur show u got a tag on ur toe/
chillin like a villain im ready able and willin/
to smack u up and beat u to a pulp cuz i bring it to ur ass the the US in the gulf/

 - thought that shit was pretty rugged, hehe geyeah that's how battles should be

jay's had good flow but honestly needed to be more hard hittin'

good battle though: 2 newbies with different styles hitting it off

vote = The1NOnly

[jaydubuwa]

thanx 4 tha input
1-0: The1NOnlyEvidence

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

word white-chocolate..thanks fo the props dogg

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

name change....i didnt feel right saying i was the 1 and only evidence....we alll know Ev from Dilated rules his shit....so u see my new name....it will be changed permantently soon.

[vitodeluca]

Vote= Jaydubuwa

his shit flowed better, I thought, one and only had some decent punches but one line didn't flow to the next at all sometimes, and the lines were awkward.  Y'all both would improve a lot if you started incorporatin' some multis in your rhymes, rather than just having one word rhyme.  Jaydubuwa in your first line you could make a mulit outta that shit like "pain hits phonies, you ain't one and only, lame don't know me, u ain't shit homie" ect.  Check sinsiter, mack, or daygo's rhymes for tight multis.  Peace.

[jaydubuwa]

thanx 4 tha vote vito. more votes plz.

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

YO WE NEED MORE VOTE...LETS DO THIS YA HEARD

[TheSheriff]

jaydubya or whatever it is

his flowed better, simple as that

[Lost Titan]

yo jay flows a lot better, she tore it up (yeah she a girl)

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

aight aight...s'all good....well homies i guess i gotta place more commas to let yall know how it sounds in my head....much to learn thats fo sho...thanks for tha input