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The1NOnlyEvidence vs. jaydubuwa

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Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
yo vito thanks for the advice amn thats what i was lookin for....i just thought id try explaining myself better in hte last one but i went a little overboard i guess..haha..oh well im just learning man just tryin to feel how its done around here...anyways thanks again homie...peace 1

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
so let me see if i got u right...
as an MC u have no skillz, u just poppin pills and sendin bills while i be out lookin fo thrills, and it kills, me as a playa in this game, i have no shame its all lame, u just cant be who u claim...stating u a gangsta, ur store bought u will get shot  if u get caught u just a wanksta, pranksta, little boy spanksta, best move out the way or get got by my tanksta, or a shanksta in ur fuckin flanksta...shit, if u knew how raw i was, u would be shocked how its on lock and u get rocked if u step cuz.......tell me how that is homies

vitodeluca:
DAAAAMMMMMNN HOMIE!  Seriously dude, you just improved like 1000% , that was cool man.  Now just incorporate some multis and some metaphors and you'll be a stone cold killa!  Peace man.

White-Chocolate:
ya G, once you got that down then just tidy shit up a bit cuz ur lines are so long, just space it out and shit, make it loook PIMP y'know lol
peaze

*nice shit by the way, i agree on the improve bro

jaydubuwa:
Actin like farmer joe, fuckin ur scraggled tooth hoe wit her nasty camel toe/
This shitz realistic ,ur view's too optimistic got me goin ballistic tryin to make u realize u got wack logistic/
Ya need ta learn ta describe yo shit , no onez feelin ur vibe not even a lil bit, me beatin ya once has u in a hissy fit, like a little bitch still suckin his mamaz tit/
Just cuz I'm a female doesnt mean I'm destined to fail -got u goin crazy like a dog chasin his own tail/
I'm not a ditzy chick thinking Im too ritzy to truthfully say ur a limp dick odeed on viagara havin all tha gurlz u pursue say sayonara/
Shit in a conflict I wouldnt use mace but I would make sure my fist would shatta ur mad hatta face and be so fast that tha cops wouldn't match my pace/
Hopefully this is tha last battle we share cuz  anymore of ur thoughtless rugged style I couldnt bear-thinking ur off tha wall technique would make this battle yours but ya don't get tha drift that theez words come quickly like sweat out my pores that catalyze u to cry like a bitch ass on all fourz/

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