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The1NOnlyEvidence vs. jaydubuwa

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White-Chocolate:
i'ma have to go with The1NOnly on this...
explanation: his shit was hard hitting from beginning to end, some real cut throat shit, i like the raw aggression there, these lines were hella tight

tha don of em all they rise and they fall but i be the one who beats u to a crawl/

lookin for love in alll the wrong places/
homie u dont know me but i will love to beat yo face in/
like a dog in a cage ill make u feel my rage ill rip ur fuckin heart out then its war i will wage/

u cant do ur show u got a tag on ur toe/
chillin like a villain im ready able and willin/
to smack u up and beat u to a pulp cuz i bring it to ur ass the the US in the gulf/

 - thought that shit was pretty rugged, hehe geyeah that's how battles should be

jay's had good flow but honestly needed to be more hard hittin'

good battle though: 2 newbies with different styles hitting it off

vote = The1NOnly

jaydubuwa:
thanx 4 tha input
1-0: The1NOnlyEvidence

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
word white-chocolate..thanks fo the props dogg

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
name change....i didnt feel right saying i was the 1 and only evidence....we alll know Ev from Dilated rules his shit....so u see my new name....it will be changed permantently soon.

vitodeluca:
Vote= Jaydubuwa

his shit flowed better, I thought, one and only had some decent punches but one line didn't flow to the next at all sometimes, and the lines were awkward.  Y'all both would improve a lot if you started incorporatin' some multis in your rhymes, rather than just having one word rhyme.  Jaydubuwa in your first line you could make a mulit outta that shit like "pain hits phonies, you ain't one and only, lame don't know me, u ain't shit homie" ect.  Check sinsiter, mack, or daygo's rhymes for tight multis.  Peace.

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