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abstruse vs. vitodeluca (verses up)

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vitodeluca:
ayight, short and sweet, 8-10 bars, 4 votes wins, 3-0 KO, brriiiinnnnggg it....

abstruse:
No beef, wrote this in 4th period.

i punch first, call me a starting-needle //
startle-people when i turn to my alter-ego //
dangerous i cause-horror like tropical-storms named el-nino // (1)
i'm the logical-norm rip any italian god-father so tell-vito // (2)
the neenas locked-bitch ready to be popped-on-this-foo //
droppin hot-shit you'd think i just squat-ed-on-you //
the t-table's not needed when emcee's dont compare //
ya couldn't rock the mic flowing on a rockin chair //
a-b-s a tomcat with the desires to sex-the-nation //
finish emcees in less bars then vitos battle explanations // (3)

(1) Horror pronounced (Hawr-er) not like (Whore-er). ;)
(2) Vito is his name, and he's Italian.  Vito Corleone was the godfather in "The Godfather"
(3) He has a tendency of having about 9 or 10 things needed to be explained in battles.

vitodeluca:
abstruse needs to abstain from being obtuse,this ain't news, I won't refrain from abuse,
just an excuse for the pain I'm bout to let loose, abtuse caught in a game bout to lose
16 years old, hard ons seen from pee holds, came to see vito, quit lyin, ya never seen vagina, I gotta give ya a prima,
have to teach-ya-bout-sex-so, ya couldn't "see a playa" if ya was on a beach-out-in-mexico,
a no-heart-virgin, chance of a win start-to-worsen, I already battled Mack once, now I gotta battle the k-mart-version,
an unfootnooted gripping free demonstration, this ripping needs no explanation, smoke you like a humbolt hippy weed plantation,
tryin' to spit recycled shit, see-that-it's-evident-ya-can't, style like you went swimmin' in sewage-treatment -plants,
new kid on the block, new bid on my jock, style phony-n-awkward, watch as I end the career of this fake Donnie-Walberg

·SiNiStEr·:
ok

Abstruse - short bars but semi-hard hittin. you should have taken advantage of the short bar count and dropped longer bars. ok multis.. nuthin really seemed to jump out.

Vito - a lil multi, a lil meta.. nice lil  battle verse. nuthin wrong wit is just not exemplary.

Both verses were aight.. not up to either of yalls potential but a decent battle nonetheless.

Abstruse - 3.75 / 5
Vito - 4 / 5

Vote - Vito[/b]

vitodeluca:
Thanks Sin, 1-0, and you're right, I wrote the shit quick...

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