Author Topic: Peep this... crits welcome (Read 211 times)

ill natural · « **Reply #15 on:** June 04, 2003, 06:34:45 AM »

it was working till yesterday.. some wierd shit seems to be up again. damn fullerene.

bez · « **Reply #16 on:** June 04, 2003, 10:28:11 AM »

Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on June 01, 2003, 10:38:32 AM

Quote from: Bez on June 01, 2003, 06:52:16 AM
dam yer, it was fucking dope tho, the lines we dope as fuck. U cud be a dope battler if you cud do that in all your rhymes, you wud crush most of the people here. keep spitting gangsta.

bez i dont see you battlin? dont be talkin that mess..

anyway good shit adam.. i like the rhyme scheme.. dope shit

Man that wasn't a diss, if it was I wud of said it was. I was just basically saying his rhyme was dope and he wud be a good battler. So shhhhhhh.

Black Pack · « **Reply #17 on:** June 04, 2003, 05:12:08 PM »

I like this peice alot. Great content and even though many have dealt with the subject before this was quite unique. I like the title "Return of the Zodiac:, keep dropping your rhymes.