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==DeaDSouLjaH vs Sinister==

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·SiNiStEr·:
fuck.. i forgot about this one.. gimme a few days

·SiNiStEr·:
Arrghhhhhh.. enough.

~Incarcerated dead souljah? I told-ya, if you leave you stay gone like hussein and the ayatollah//
~Time to fast-forward, Im gonna rip this kid a new asshole, a lyrikal spankin, damn kid i know this gonna be yo last-flow//
~Still mad from a recent-loss, you a decent-hoss but im the feature-boss, punches derive from underneath-jaws//
~Looked back and feasted-on-flaws, my verse was contained till i unleashed-muh-bars, its tha beast-from-mars//
~DS a plague who just queefed SARS, what you gon do when i grasp fees-from-jars, the dubcc elite company-is-ours//
~Im fixin to attack-ya-verse, u made a thread but ill combat-it-first, lyrikal murda and i just contracted-my-thirst//
~Retracted-the-hearse, dont give a fuck about flow its the content-that-counts, still ya competent-amounts to nuthin but a dimented-bounce//
~Spittin "single bars" so you'll soon find yaself solo with others, MD a white fanny pack you call band of brothers//
~"Overweight" rhymes like wavy fat, DeadSouljah looked cool till he strapped on the old-navy-hat!//  (avatar)
~Haha.. fool you just called yourself inefficient, melanin aint the only that you deficient, kinda like me in this battle wit no competition//
~Battled over 15 times and still stare-at-defeat, cant even compare-the-elite, comin back at ya with a snare-to-the-beat//
~Im like Ozzy Osbourne runnin this shit without a straight head, damn DS, thought you were a vet but you still wet the bed!//
~Its like jiffy lube when I serve this cat automatic, named himself a combatant but soon was lost like an old lady in bad traffic//
~Im a newbie? At least i dont put my rhymes-in-bold, watch these lyrikal crimes-unfold and i just installed the timed-deadbolt//
~Shit makes ya head-jolt, fillin max bars cuz i know you be feelin my shit when the lead's-cold//

Different style then usual.. sorta like DS', i didnt use footnotes to see wut its like.. most shit is self-explanatory.. just thought i'd throw out somethin different for yall.. maybe i should smoke before i write this shit.
anyway peace yall.. lez get some VOTES!

vitodeluca:
Sin- I like it man, tight flow, good multis and metas, hard punches.  Kinda refreshing to read a verse straight through.  Favorite line was the one about the old navy hat.  Real good especially considerin' how fast you spit.

DS- Your multis were definitely the strongest part of your verse, but seemingly at the expense of the other areas, i.e. unstrung guitars/stung with guitars...haysticks that are eroded(?).  Maybe I'm missin' somethin.  Anyways, I didn't really feel your punches hit that hard and some flow was sacrificed in the name of you multies as well.  Overall a good verse, just not as good as Sin's

Vote=Sin

·SiNiStEr·:
yeah.. lol.. i said i was gonna take a few days but i got bored and just wrote it right there. my verse is a shitload longer than ds'.. yall take that into account, thanks vito for votin.

DeaDSouLjaH:
more votes pls..
uppin ..

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