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Ill Natural vs Vitodeluca

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vitodeluca:
Attention everyone, class is in session, vito's appointed to teach this bitch ill a lesson....

Little bitch lass tryin' to switch to the head-a-the-class, like a male givin birth get ya head-outta-ya-ass,//
premature ejaculater tryin' to "come up fast", only "footnote" I'll need is when you note my foot in yo ass,//
style remindin' me of prom-dances n church-lunches, your wins got non-chances cause you came with weak-"punches" (non-spiked, get it?)//
battle-incontinent, ya can't win with regularity, stop prattlin'-shit, between you and me there's skill disparity,//
206 posts and you still ain't got shit on me, weak ass recycled punches that I won't take personally, your rhymes got no "personality" (personals),//
don't talk shit on W-C-C, we-ain't-sissy, we'll school newbie shit talkin' VDK's in many ways, some one come to your-AID-please!//
same-sex-loves, battle ya wearin la-tex-gloves, cause your crew is clamin-venerial-disease ("V-D"-k, hahaha),//
I should take pity on new fools, leave you with a mushroom shaped member bruise, cause after readin' this they're gonna dis-"member" you,//
wax that ass like a donkey at a car-wash, it's SARs-watch as I come-at-you, this will be your last-snafu//
I'll kill this diseased Robert Redford, it feels natural for "ill natural" to have snatch attached to his factuals,//
put pussy in his profile like he's a cat lover but "you're gettin' to old for this shit" like Danny Glover,//
dre-day-is-over, have a-way-to-show-ya, make poster-children of what happens to infrequent posters-worsened by poor-rappin and newbies who are like elite with only-veterans (no-skillz),//
24 hour time limit, hoping I'd go away, your shit's so "week", this will be the catch of the day, VDK take-em-away, I just served ill natural "filet"!!!//

vitodeluca:
Votes Please, I vote on every single battle on here, c'mon y'all.

abstruse:
Ill Natural - Very nice punches bro.  The metas were nice, you had a good flow, but you were lacking multi's and it was a little generic.

Vito - Very nice punches also.  Your flow and multi's were nice, and on point.  The metas were good also.

Vote - Vito

He basically had more wordplay then you, though I thought the punches were about even.

'Illicit':
tight battle, I'd say overall its pretty damn close, Ill had hardcore lines in it, flow was great and showed that you can dismantle cats without knowin too much bout him, Vito however had better creativity in my eyes

--- Quote ---I'll kill this diseased Robert Redford, it feels natural for "ill natural" to have snatch attached to his factuals,//
--- End quote ---
i liked this one, Vito got the edge on this one cuz of his being a bit harder at attacking Ill.

vote: Vito

·SiNiStEr·:
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Ill Natural - pretty good metas, no multis really but a overall solid verse.

Fav. Line -
A lot of kids/ think if ya don't see something it's not there...but then how does ill nat exist?/
he almost struck greatness... but I hit him back./

Vito - Vito your shit is gettin better and better. When i was readin the first two lines aloud i actually said.. "oooooooh".. lol thats rare too.Some lines dont rhyme right all the way through but a good verse.

Fav. Line -
Little bitch lass tryin' to switch to the head-a-the-class, like a male givin birth get ya head-outta-ya-ass,//
premature ejaculater tryin' to "come up fast", only "footnote" I'll need is when you note my foot in yo ass,//

Both verses tight.. hot battle.

Ill - 4.25 / 5
Vito - 4.4 / 5

Vito incorporated more complex rhyming schemes and even though naturals verse was real dope.. vito gets it for takin a challenge and followin through wit it.

Vote - [glow=light blue,2,300]Vito[/glow]

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