Qurate-L VS Concrete

[Qurate-L]

aight the rules are

12 bars
4 vote win
3-0 K.O.
open votes
explain votes
2 verse

im first

[Qurate-L]

ok im kickin this shit off its a battle a faultable wits/
when im through wit you ya throatll have multiple slits/
you think you can get through this shit you wanna murder me?/
when im through wit you bitch your gonna need heart surgery/
yo man you say yer name is fucken concrete?/
well ill take all yer fame and smash you on the sida the street/
you lost before you even accepted this one sided fight/
i finished and now i dissected ya wrist now lets see ya hold a mic/
when im finished this shit youll be cryin/
when this is done ill be the one youll be eyein/
youll wonder how you can get me back *snap* oops i broke ya back/
jus like you, when this is ova yer lyrics are gonna crack/

ok that was the first verse drop yers then one more round

[Juda]

"call the ambulance" on this nigga/
talking like a furious nigga/
better back your ass down before i start pullin' this trigger/
Qurate-L?/
Nigga, now you've started it, the fights on you've run the bell/
let me tell you something son/
i bun puns, run guns, against you cunts/
you rap like you in pampers, shit you an amateur/
you sure you wanna hustle with me?/
you better work on your free, and throw 300 barz in one sittin'/
crtics and credentials, dont you know half my shit is influentail to your style/
you bite mine, you bite rhymes/
indirect you know im your master, recognize bastard!/

[bostonboy]

vote: quarate

both had simple rhymes and no multis.  quarate had a better flow and stronger punches so he took this one...

[Qurate-L]

"better back your ass down before i start"
i better run cuz to you a vibrating dildo is an art/
before you start spitten disses towards me, im lyricaly mastered,/
get a dictionary kid cuz its a miracle you can even spell bastard/
ok come at me with all your force, you wana mess-with-me?/
im Qurate-L kid and im your lyrical des-tiny/
you dont even know about me do you i hit effectivly/
with every rhyme, when you lose this bitch dont whine/
the second you posted yer first verse you crossed da line/
after this is over and youve finished ill destroy yer mind/
you say your shit is influential you bitch-dike-foo/
you influenced people to quit ridin dicks-like-you/
 

[Qurate-L]

ok round 2 after concrete drops his second verse time 2 vote so far 1-0

[Qurate-L]

vote: quarate

both had simple rhymes and no multis.  quarate had a better flow and stronger punches so he took this one...

ya normally i focus on multis but im kinda outta it

[Juda]

just cuz i can spit faster than bone thugs in harmony/
doesnt mean you can be harmin' me/
your shits fake, my shit quakes six states, Concrete's the great/
don't try to test the next 2 Pac or biggie, im ill and gritty,/
ur too shitty, get ur tipsy ass back in ur books/
to study ur hooks, like the shit Ja Rule took/
u can't even compare to Ja, u betta get hooked/
to the floetry of my sound, cuz it getz ur mind shook/
i flow serious cuz im durastic/
nigga u classic, u'll get ur ass kicked/
ur the last trick to come at me with some wack shit/
cuz im bout to finish it, cuz im the sickest nigga alive/
listen to these lirix carefully, cuz they rip u mentally,/
physically and internally, cuz my styles r dirty/
ur ass iz jus another disease like herpies/

[Juda]

 ok voting starts now

[Qurate-L]

good use of multis way better then yer first drop lol ive bin at a bit of writers block 4 a while so most of what i write right now isnt that good at least 2 me

[Juda]

 We need votes plz

[Black Pack]

Neither of you came with hard verses, it was average. I vote Quarate L only because he dissed harder and Concrete was giving himself props half of the verse, his disses were sub par. Neither had punches, multis or metas. Decent flow, Qurate gets my vote because he had a harder verse in my opinion

[Qurate-L]

ya i know i still got a lot of work ta do ive only bin in this for a month or so lol
2-0 one more i win

[TheSheriff]

Concrete wins this by a long way. Qurate's first verse was incredibly mediocre, the second was aight. Both of Concrete's were okay.

[Juda]

 seen thanx for the vote, the score is  2-1