Author Topic: Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)  (Read 272 times)

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Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« on: June 06, 2003, 06:21:22 AM »
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Mr.Indy to those who dont *know me*, heres how i battle, look at this *closely*/ Out of all that are *holy*, god looked down at raw talent and *chose me*/ Im 2 fast 2 furious, your not smart, but ever so curious, i'll devour you *slowly*/ This was the *pre-view*, if ya cant keep up wit my pace, keep to this *free-view*/ *ready~2~rumble* knockout *immanent* your fate and this is not *co-insident* your *steady~but~stumble*/ Your stardom lights *fillament* then fuses by faulty *equipment* macks flows *out~of~date*/ Posting up that key was *accident* i'd too hide me username if i wrote *millitant*/ You *heavyweight?* but i *doubt~your~weight* due to biting a *featherweight*/ Macks mouth fulla *verbal* when he spits, its in small doses, equivalent to a *gerbal*/ Thought he would be dope, if his tea was *herbal*, would get frills if i signed up and called him my *referrel*/ I'd *kick~his~ass* with free verse *enjamberment~too*, then *nick~his~pass* to become part of a *disemberment~kru*/ Initials *VDK* for Vast Dick Kramp, coz the amount of *blow~jobs* towards *macks~former~buddies*/ *DIK* coz they think they gangtsa, but theres *no~mob* to even watch my *back~for~the~teletubbies*/ Hit me back with a jab *one~two* now this just a friendly battle, coz i wanna *join~you*/

^^ What ya say? can i join VDK?

lol.. peace

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« Last Edit: June 06, 2003, 06:23:07 AM by Ind£ci$iv3 »
 

da_notorious_mack

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2003, 08:03:57 AM »
My opinion on ya flow,like ya name is Inde-cesive~//
i cant decide whether i hate it or jus plain despise-it~//
im undecided,but now he decided it VDK he wanna ride-wit?~//{noooooooooooooo}
sorry dude,try-outz over,now say bye bye-bitch~//
when do ya lies-stop?,stay off the battle-board~//
stay postin ya soppy keys,or imma rattle-ya-jaw~//
imma whip you,youll be screamin after ive dropped-the-belt~//
judgin ya life thru those keyz you drop,you should top-ya-self!~//
cus it sounds like nobody likes-you,stay away from mics-too~//
i used to bite to get wins,explains why i wouldnt bite-you!~//
even Gary talk behind-ya-back,youll find-thats-fact~//
ask him bout the msn convo,hell know it bout that time-wit-mack!~//
and you never could ride wit us,you first to be verbally-dismembered~//
ill be eternally-remembered,on the fuckin WCC fa murderin-its-members~//
did ya get-that-shit?we reject-ya-bid,make ya eyes pop like my boy X's-sig~//
im infected-sick,well affect-ya-clique,if we detect-they-bitch!~//
like the feces of diabetes,this fuckin "shit-aint-sweet"~//
and ya clique-aint-street,you the fuckin bitch-in-elite~//
sendin pm's to me,talkin bout VDK,talkin bout "get-me-in"~//
an then this fuck makes rules like "let-me-win"!~//



 

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #2 on: June 06, 2003, 01:54:32 PM »
where the fuckin luv?
 

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #3 on: June 06, 2003, 02:13:03 PM »
Ind£ci$iv3 had good rhyme and flow but lacked punch.
mack was banging and had heart

vote= mack
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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #4 on: June 06, 2003, 02:16:43 PM »
ill vote later..
as for this.


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Hit me back with a jab *one~two* now this just a friendly battle, coz i wanna *join~you*/

^^ What ya say? can i join VDK?


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« Last Edit: June 06, 2003, 02:17:07 PM by ·SiNiStEr· »
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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #5 on: June 06, 2003, 02:58:04 PM »
Indy - Nice verse, you had multi's and it flowed well.   The punches were off, and it didn't seem like too much of a battle verse tho.  It seemed like you were just repping yourself in order to join VDK(more like a tryout verse). Fav Line

Your stardom lights *fillament* then fuses by faulty *equipment* macks flows *out~of~date*/
Posting up that key was *accident* i'd too hide me username if i wrote *millitant*/

Mack - Also nice verse, the multi's and flow were on point.  Your punches were hitting hard also.  It was a good overall battle verse. though you went like 3 bars without rhyming. Fav Line

cus it sounds like nobody likes-you,stay away from mics-too~//
i used to bite to get wins,explains why i wouldnt bite-you!~//

Vote - Mack


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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2003, 03:11:31 PM »
Indy: Good shit, kinda of a keystyle type verse though.  Some of your multis didn't really make sense to me (ready to rumble/you're steady but stumble) and back for the teletubbies, maybe some footnotes?  Not really up on the teletubbies references.  Anyways, flow was good, but multis were hit/miss and the punches didn't seem to be that hard

Mack: First line was comedy man "My opinion on ya flow,like ya name is Inde-cesive~//
i cant decide whether i hate it or jus plain despise-it~//" hahaha.  Multis were tight except for the battle-board/rattle ya jaw one, everything else was on point.  Good punches and clever wordplay.  As usual, tight verse.

vote= Mack

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2003, 03:28:11 PM »
indecisive... man my eyes are hurting cause of those fucking stars and what not in your verse. whats the point of that shit?? you're just taking away from your verse man.... anyways weak punches and you kinda handed mack the battle on a plate with your last line cause you dissed vdk through your battle and in the end go on to say you wanna join...???? that kinda made those disses irrevelant...
flow was on point though...  good shit, but like vito said not a strong enough battle verse.

mack, ill shit homie... tight punches, multis and flow..

vote= mack
« Last Edit: June 06, 2003, 03:39:16 PM by ill natural »
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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #8 on: June 06, 2003, 04:37:23 PM »
Gary talk behind-ya-back,youll find-thats-fact~//
ask him bout the msn convo,hell know it bout that time-wit-mack!~//

????? whats that shit all about?
 

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #9 on: June 07, 2003, 04:42:09 AM »
good battle.. not gonna explain coz my point of view has been stated by other voters... Both good verse,, but mack if in fire at the moment...

vote: mack

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Re:Ind£ci$iv3 [VS] Mack (for ol'times sake)
« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2003, 03:32:58 AM »
i would have voted but i entered too late. nice battle.

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