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ThaProphecy Vs. Concrete

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Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
aight heres how it will be...


15 bars
first to 4 votes
3-0 KO
u cant use the word "nigga" either
explain votes

tell me what u think of that and u go first

aight peace.....one

Juda:
 ye guy, rules look ok.. so ill drop first, probably in a day..if thats cool?

Juda:
Man, i can't believe i accepted this battle/
i hate to be a tattle-tale, but your rhymes are stale/
there wrong like soap in jail, they bounce off me like incoming hail, ur a lil baby rapped in a cradle/
dont test me cuz every time Concrete will prevail/
wait....You a male or female? i cant remember/
I'll  never render my surrender to this weak contender/
How can you say your a prophecy/
You dont know how far i can go when im rocking dez, mocking me?/
please, soon you'll bee popping the glock to ease/
the pressure from my harmful and contagious disease/
just writting dez lyrices is a waste of my time/
someone call the police on this kid cuz hes bout to commit a crime!!/
your lyrics suck, no effect like a old shitty dime/
So move your big Caboose/
cuz im coming through, my raps are complex your's a simple/
like Dr.Suess spittin' on Elliot the moose/

                                                         Ez

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
Shit, ur rhymes are ground bound while mine take flight and break the speed of light and sound/
so profound, The King ill be crowned, for entertainment ill call out "Concrete tha clown"/
Hold up there dont pause it, gotta make this crystal clear/ Concrete is comin out tha clozit, hot beef injections in his rear/
Ok ok no more gay bashing, dont want GLAAD and Concrete comin at me wit teeth gnashing/(1)
tryin to rape-me so hatefull-y, i might have to start slashing/
U ask my fuckin gender, well homie ur bitch i will bend her, is that the best answer sender?/
 U talk about an old shitty dime, fuck i aint got the time to listen to ur rhyme about currency that has been worn by a  timeline/
and its fine time...to state, that when u lyrically  masterbate ur shit sprays everywhere like Ben Stiller before his date/(2)
All ova tha place, no direction in ur rhyme selection makes for an escape like shawshank redemption/
theres no contention, when i battle right back, i forgot to mention, that ur shit is so off-track/
as a matter of fact, ur "contagious disease" is H-I-Veez, S-T-Deez, so dont ask if u can suck deez/



(1) GLAAD is a gay rights group
(2) Something about mary - ben stiller jerks off before his date

aight well lets get these votes goin

vitodeluca:
vote= prophecy, drastic improvement in your verse from earlier work, good shit man.  Some pretty funny metas and I got all your references without the footnotes.

Concrete, rhyme scheme's still a little simplistic and you could try and incoporate some better metas and multis into your shit.

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