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First ever attempt at a song

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bez:
I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  

The off the wall thing isn't to bad, its better than the song but overall truthfully I am going to say that i didnt feel it too much.  Keep trying tho mate I will peep everything u post up.  Practice makes perfect kiddah.

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bez is the first one to tell u like it is lol ;D

basically what i told u on msn if how i feel ;)

ITW [the irish boy]:
I actually thought this was alright, after listening to it for a bit. Sounds a lot like the streets or blazin squad, and the flow is let down at times. I personnally however amnt a fan of that kind of "the streets" rappin so i wasnt hugely feeling this, but keep it up, it needs some work, but your going in the right direction

Reef:

--- Quote from: Bez on June 12, 2003, 05:15:49 PM ---I aint gunna lie to you man but I didnt like the song at all.  Your voice makes you sound like your from the blazin squad and your basically talking over a beat, trying to fit to many words into 1 bar.  
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that must have been the most offensive thing ive heard.. LOL

Nahh its cool people (ITW & Bez).. Thanks for the feedback.. The problem is... I was rappin that slow n quietly to  get feelin into the song... and if i do rap normal speed in my accent im going to soun like blazin squad or the streets coz i am british.. ya feel me?

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