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Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(vito won)
abstruse:
Vitodeluca - Very good flow, and nice wordplay. The multi's were on point and so were the punches. Kinda liked the fact that you used less explanations and sticked more to relevant subjects ;). Fav line
"hope-adam-X-knew-the lord, voters'll-pack-ouija-boards to de-"cypher" this-when-I-spit, Xplicit's-gettin'-R.I.P. 'd"
Overall - 4.25/5
Adam X - The vocab in your verse was nice. You came with hard hittin punches also. Beside you breaking down his name, your verse lacked wordplay. Sometimes it was hard to depict the flow on the verse also. Don't really know what happenned to the 15 bar max either. Fav line
"Vitodeluca is in deep shit...upside down...i think it's time to swallow excrement./ I let you flow awhile so you might've seemed cool to degenerates and special problem residents/ And like a kid with speech impediments... you k-kinda t-talk repetitive/"
Overall - 3.8/5
Vote - Vitodeluca
ill natural:
Vito- Tight verse man, good disses and punches and i like how played around with our names. dope
Adam- I've seen better from you homie.. It was dope but whatever ive seen from you in the past has been much doper. But that breaking down his name shit was maaad creative... That was dopeness and what gives you the battle.
vote- adam
vitodeluca:
Allright, 2-1, Adam's winnin'..for the record I don't care about this whole "how many bars" argument, his verse is fine as far as I'm concerned.
Tasa:
difficult to judge you brough heat! both verses had good flows and their strong lines. some recycled/overused lines though.
Vitodeluca best lines:
"WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,"
you had a good opening and a pretty solid verse throughout. Ill punches too 4/5
Adam best lines:
Easily that "VITO DIES NOW" part of the verse, that was some clever rhyming. Again a solid verse throughout though a slightly tricky flow for which i had to read your verse twice. I like your opening line and think your disses were slightly more to the point and that name rhyming sequence was really dope. 4.25/5
vote- adamx
·SiNiStEr·:
aight.. this battle was hot
Vito - Damn boy you keep droppin better shit each time.. I seen some mad wordplay in ya verse and it was damn creative. Creativity and content is what i look for in a verse, ya flow was off the hook too and ya didnt get lost in multis. Damn kid.. you hot right now.
Fav. Line -
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,
somethin-ain't-right when you ride so much dick you a Veritable-Dick-Knight,U must be on the charitable-tip-right? Cause under my win column your sig'll-fit-right
AdamX - Tight verse man.. I like your flow. This battle makes me feel like a newbie haha but its cool. Anyway, nice metas and you have a damn complex vocabulary. Only thing that i didnt like was one part ya lost the flow. That Vito dies now is kinda played out and if I would do that sorta wordplay i woulda done a different phrase than 'vito dies now' but still a hot verse.
Fav. Line -
Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/
Pussy... I harm vaginas and I know this whore's coordinates/ A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates/
Numbaz..
Vito - 4.55 / 5
AdamX - 4.45 / 5
I gave this to Vito cuz he used some more keystyle elements with the multis.. yall had the same amount of metas but Adam only used 2 or 3 bar punches and the words he was usin were deep in vocabulary but sorta easy to rhyme. The played out 'vito dies now' was probably the deciding factor, Adam if you incorporate some of the more keystyle elements you would have taken this one easy.. i know that aint your style but thats what i base my votes on and ive been voter of the month for a while now so your choice.
Dont get me wrong.. yall can say d/r vote but this was the hardest battle ive ever voted on fo real.. Adam and Vito both showin some mad potential.. yall scarin me lol.
Vote - VitoDeLuca
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